鳄鱼的眼泪歌词-大学生生活费调查

2021年1月31日发(作者：南海是中国的)
09
高考英语作文写作攻略

1.
请用英语写一篇
100< br>词左右的短文，简要描述漫画内容，并结合生活实际，

就漫画
主题发表感想，题目自拟。参考词汇：公民道德
—
civic virtue

【解题指导】

本文要求描述漫画内容，结合生活实际，就 漫画主题发表感想。体裁为议论文，人称
为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。先读懂漫画含义，抓主体；然 后展开合理想象，揭寓意；
最后根据实际，谈认识。

【
思路点拨
】

1
．细心审阅画面，包括提示文字，描述漫 画。本文写清以下要点⑴
随地吐痰；⑵
乱扔
香蕉皮；⑶
孩子手拿《公民道德》 ，询问
“
谁丢了公民道德
”
；⑷
发表议论。

2
．联系实际，揣摩画面寓意。
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3
．遣词造句①
see sb do sth

②
throw sth on the ground

③
The boy handing the book, shouted,
“Who lose civic virtue?”


④
I wish…

4.
根据画面构思，连句成文。

【
范文欣赏
】

Who Lose Civic V
irtue?
One day, a child went home after class. On his way home, he saw some adults spit on the
ground.
On
the
other side
of
the road,
a
man
threw the
garbage
on
the
ground
after
eating
a
banana. The child found a book Civic Virtue, lying on the ground. So he picked up the book and
shouted, “Who lose civic virtue?”

The child’s words should make people think more. Now, many people are scared of civic
vir
tue, and don’t protect public environment at all. I wish this cartoon can wake their virtue and
make our life better.

【点评】
w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m

1
．本文命题 新颖，手法独到，走出近几年高考英语写作俗套，以漫画为依据，考查考
生对客观世界的感知和认识，从 而考查考生的思维想象、观察和明辨能力。

2
．
采分点突出，
标题 一语中的，
结尾议论得体。
文中用了不少的高级词汇和优美语句，
如：

…saw some adults spit on the ground, …threw the garbage on the ground,…picked up the
book and shouted…, …make people think more, …wake their virtue and make our life better,

等，使文章内容丰富，也体现了作者熟练的语言基本功。

【写作攻略】

1
．仔细观察漫画，弄清画面的含义，抓住画面的主体。

漫画写作中，画面 的主体往往是人物。要从画面中人物的形体、相貌、服饰等，弄清
人物的性别、年龄、身份；从人物的表 情、动作，推测人物的思想面貌，以及他在干什么；
还要观察周围环境，弄清事件发生的时间、地点以及 和事件有关的情况。

2
．根据画面内容，进行合理想象，使画面
“
动
”
起来，从而形成一个完整的小故事。

画面上的人物，景物，甚至色彩， 要求借助于图画提供的形象，联系生活经验进行合
理想象，把图上的人物写活，把事情的来龙去脉交代清 楚。写人、记事、写景、状物不仅
要有色，
而且要有声；
不仅描绘事物的静态，
而且要有事物的动态；
不仅要有人物的外貌、
神态，而且要有人物的语言行动及人物的思想感 情。总之，要把静止的画面
“
活动化
”
，要
把平面的事物
“
立体化
”
。但想象不是盲目的，要有目的，绝不能脱离画面，任意发挥。

3
．认真安排内容，布局谋篇。
w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m

在写作时，要按照从整体到部分，由远到近等顺序，做到言之有序；要抓住重点，突
出中心；在 语言表达上，既要有连贯的叙述，又要有形象的描写，达到生动、形象地表达
画面的内容。完稿后，再对 照漫画反复阅读，认真地加以修改。这样，一篇好的漫画作文
就产生了。

漫画作文不 仅让学生轻松作文，写下真实的内容，而且它变枯燥乏味的作文为兴趣主
动地写作，培养了学生的观察、 想象、思维、创新能力。漫画作文不失为高考中的一条新
路。

【技巧点拨】

1
．

漫画作文属于材料作文中的一种，认真读图，解其内涵，用正确的认识 领悟漫画
的深刻寓意是成功之本。

2
．善于选点。

“< br>选点
”
就是确定写作的立意点，一幅漫画的寓意可以多角度理解，在
审读的时候 ，要做到理解到位。否则，文章内容头绪众多，是不利于表达的。

3
．
善于 引发。
由此及彼地加以联想与引申，
在画面意义的基础上联想到另一层新的内
容。
4
．
思维要与漫画的寓意保持一致；
情节的发展，
人物的刻画 要以人物的动作描写和心
理描写等来完成，慧眼独到与作者的思想达到一致，因为对于一幅漫画，不是所 有人都能
读出它的奥妙来。

【即时演练】
w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m

2
.阅读下面漫画，先对漫画的内容进行描述，然后对这一现象发表自己的看法。
（
100词左右）








The boy and the girl in the picture sat on a bench talking merrily while eating a water-melon.
When they went away they left the melon’s skin on the bench, making it very dirty. They didn’t
want to take any trouble throwing it into the dustbin although it was very near where they were
sitting. Instead, they said that there would be someone who should clean the rubbish.
However, what they did violate public morality. If everyone behaves in this way, the world
will be a big rubbish dump with files flying
round and people will
live
in a world of diseases.
Besides, dustmen will have a very, very hard job to clean the world we live in.

3.
假如你是李平，就读高三，最近收看了中央电视台《青春中国》某栏目 ，对你启发很
大。片中介绍的情况如下表，请根据表格内容给某英文报社写信，谈谈你的看法。

栏目主题：大学生活状况

1
，大学生到校后，有失落感，精神萎靡不振。

现象

2
，有的自加压力，争强好胜，造成精神分裂，甚至自杀。

1
，虽 在原校很优秀，但大学人才济济，都很优秀。因此保持
你的看
心理平衡，是确保学好的第一因素 。

法

2
，做好心理准备，努力学习，考取大学。

建议

正确引导，关注学生健康成长。


要求：
1
，书信内容必须包括表中所有信息，可适当发挥。


2
，信的开头已为你写好。
w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m


3
，词数，
120
—
150
左右。


Dear editor,

Recently I have watched the program “Y
outh china” on

CCTV…


___________________________ _________________________

________________________
yours

Li Ping

Dear editor,
Recently I have watched the program “Y
outh China” on
CCTV
. I feel very astonished. In
one
of
the sections, the
host
shows
us
some college
students
had
a
feeling
of
being
neglected
after entering college, as the result that they were in low spirits and didn’t work hard; And that
some
of
them,
however,
forced
themselves
to remain
the
first
of
his
class,
worked
harder
and
harder, of course, and a
t last were upset at it.. What’s worse, even some killed themselves.

In my opinion, maybe one is excellent
in the past, but at college many capable people get
together. One should keep the balance in his mind and first of all, knowing how to study is the
highest
of
the
highest.
As
a
senior
3
student,
I
think,
I
should
study
hard
to
enter
college
smoothly and at the same time I should be well prepared in my mind. At last I call on all teachers
and the whole society to guide the students correctly and care for their growing up.

Y
ours

Li Ping
w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m

4.

近年来，在迅速积累财富的过程中，
有些厂家和商家为牟取暴利，
生产和销售假冒伪
劣产品 。假如你是校园小记者，请以
“Harmfulness of fake products”
为题，就你身边情况，
根据下表提供情况，向观众作以报道，提醒消费者注意。

1
，厂家及商人以赚钱、赢利为目的，不顾及群众的生命安全。

危害

2
，假冒伪劣食品流入市场，引起食物中毒。

3
，劣质奶粉，严重威胁下一代。

1
，公民应提高防范意识，安全、卫生措施应得到保证。

防范措施

2
，政府部门应加强执法力度，严厉打击制假、买假行为。

呼吁

努力学习，懂得自己肩负的重任，长大切实为人民服务。

注意：
1
，文章必须包括表中所有内容，可增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2
，词数
120
左右。

3
，参考词汇：制假、买假

make and sell fake products

肩负重任
shoulder the responsibility of
参考答案：


Harmfulness of fake products

In
the
race
to
become rich
quickly,
some factories
and
businessmen
just
think
to
make
money and profits, To make and sell fake products, they don’t allow for the people’s life. Now
fake
food
products
come
to
the
markets,
causing
people
poisoned.
Food
poisoning
is
an
increasing
problem
in
both
cities
and
the
countryside.
Fake
milk
powder
threatened
babies
seriously.

I think people should
improve the conscience of defence to guarantee the people’s safety
and hygiene. On the other hand, the government should strengthen to enforce the law strictly and
crack
down
the
conducts
of
making
and
selling
of
fake
products.
As
students
we
know
we
shoulder the responsibility of building our motherland, we should work hard to serve the people
heart and soul after growing up.
w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m



5.
假如你是校园网络播音员，就新义务教育法向师
生进行宣传：

1.
农村义务教育学段，学校
“
不收学费，杂费
”
，反
映了教育的公益性 。

2.
学校不得向学生收取其他费用，包括学校活动
和办学支出，校服，卧具等。

3.
新法采取了多种措施，保障儿童平等地接受教
育。

4.
保证了适龄儿童接受教育，促进学生全面发展，保证了教育质量。

One possible version
Dear schoolmates,
Look at the picture in the screen, why are the children so happy? Here is a piece of news! As
is
shown
in
the
picture,
“we
all
can
afford
to
go
to
school”.
Indeed,
the
New
Laws
of
Compulsory
Education
has
been
published
by
our
government
recently.
And
all
rural
school
students will
never
be
charged for
their
tuition
fees
and
all
other
expenses
for school, which
further shows the public welfare of education.
Now all kinds of measures have been taken to ensure all children of school age, who can go
to school free of charge and exams, can receive education equally. The new laws make it a rule
that all schools mustn’t collect any fees, such as expenses on school activities, school uniforms,
beddings and so on. The performance of the new laws of compulsory education can ensure all
school age children to receive education, promote the development of all students and improve
the quality of education.
w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m

【解题指导】

1.
文章主要内容为宣传新义务教育法，可确定体裁说明文，时态一般现在时，第三人
称。

2.
表达过程要紧扣新义务教育法主要内容，即提示要点，可适当发挥，但不能偏离主

鳄鱼的眼泪歌词-大学生生活费调查

鳄鱼的眼泪歌词-大学生生活费调查

鳄鱼的眼泪歌词-大学生生活费调查

鳄鱼的眼泪歌词-大学生生活费调查

鳄鱼的眼泪歌词-大学生生活费调查

鳄鱼的眼泪歌词-大学生生活费调查

鳄鱼的眼泪歌词-大学生生活费调查

鳄鱼的眼泪歌词-大学生生活费调查