评语大全之英文论文评语
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英文论文评语
【篇一：英语本科论文指导教师评语】
英语本科毕业论文评语
对毕业论文（设计）完成情况及质量、工作能力及态度、思想
表现、
论文学术水平等进行总体评价
孙悟空：
孙悟空同学能按照相关论文写作要求，认真地展开工作并作按时完
成毕业论文任务，质量
一般。论文的选题有一定研究价值，结构基
本合理，各部分基本符合英语论文的写作要求
。为了写好这篇论文，
作者作了一定研究，但对原著的内容是不够熟悉。语言错误表达不
够简洁，说理欠充分，观点具有一定独创性，语料欠充实，论证力
度不够，未能沉入剖析主题。总体而言，基本达到毕业论文要求。
任我行：
学术界对双关语与歧义的研究虽然较多，但是把两者联系在一起的
研究较少，故该论文选题具有一定的研究意义，作者在吸收学术界
研究成果的基础上，
提出自己的见解，有说服力。论述观点正确，
语料比较充实，思路清晰、叙述层次分明，
有较强的逻辑性。语言
基本功较好，文字通顺、流畅。行文符合学术规范。如
“4.
application of ambiguity in p
uns”
从更深层次剖析双关语与歧义在
用法上的关系，则能彰
显一定的学术水平。总体而言，这是一篇较
好的毕业论文。
东方不败
东方不败同学的论文探讨农村留守初中生课后英语词汇学
习存在问题，并提出了相应的解
决策略。符合具有一定的现实意义，
论文结构合理，思路清晰，层次清晰，语句通顺。观
点表达准确。
能在论证过程中能有效的将专业原理与要研究的主题结合起来。作
者对于论文内容有一定的了解和熟悉。但文章不足之处在于研究的
效度有
待提高，总体上达到毕业论文要求。
左冷禅
该
文分析了地区院校英语专业免费师范生在教育实习中存在的问题，
并提出了解决策略。选
题符合英语专业培养培养目标与专业特色，
具有较强的针对性和现实意义。文章结构安排
合理，层次清晰，写
作时参考的相关文献资料与主题联系紧密，而且参考的资料较新，<
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在写作过程中作者能较好地运用专业基本知识原来分析问题，在论
证过程中，主要用理论论证和事实论证。但在数据分析时，在于未
能透过现象揭示本质，
论证还不够深刻充分，创新点不够。总体上
符合毕业论文要求。
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【篇二：英文论文审稿意见汇总】
英文论文审稿意见汇总
2011-04-24 19:24
以下
12
点
无轻重主次之分。每一点内容由总结性标题和代表性审稿
人意见构成。
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1
、目标和结果不清晰。
it is noted that your manuscript needs
careful editing by
someone with
expertise in technical english editing paying
particular attention to english
grammar, spelling, and sentence
structure so that the goals and results
of the study are clear to
the
reader.
2
、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。
◆
in general, there is a
lack of explanation of replicates and
statistical me thods used in the
study.
◆
furthermore, an
explanation of why the authors did these
various experiments should be
provided.
3
、对于研究
设计的
rationale:
also, there are few explanations of the rationale
for the study
design.
4
、夸张地陈述结论
/
夸大成果
/
不严谨：
the conclusions are overstated. for
example, the study did not
show
if the side
effects from initial copper burst can be avoid
with
the polymer
formulation.
5
、对
hypothesis
的清晰界定：
a hypothesis needs to be
presented
。
6
、对某个概念或工具使用的
rationale/
定义概念：
what was the
rationale for the film/sbf volume
ratio?
7
、对研究问题的定义：
try
to set the problem discussed in this paper in more
clear,
write one section to
define the problem
8
、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写
literature
review:
the topic is
novel but the application proposed is not
so
novel.
9
、对
claim,
如
a
＞
b
的证明，
verification:
there is no
experimental comparison of the algorithm with
previously known work, so it is
impossible to judge whether
the
algorithm is an improvement on previous
work.
10
、严谨度问题：
mnq is
easier than the primitive pnqs, how to prove
that.
11
、格式（重视程度）：
◆
in addition, the list of
references is not in our style. it is
close but not completely correct. i
have attached a pdf file with
instructions for authors which shows
examples.
◆
before submitting a revision be sure that your
material is
properly prepared
and
formatted. if you are
unsure, please consult the formatting
nstructions to authors that are given
under the instructions
and forms button
in he upper right-hand corner of the
screen.
12
、语言问题（出现最多的问题）：
有关语言的审稿人意见：
◆
it is noted
that your manuscript needs careful editing by
someone with expertise in technical
english editing paying
particular
attention to english grammar, spelling, and
sentence
structure so that the goals
and results of the study are clear to
the reader.
◆
the
authors must have their work reviewed by a
proper translation/reviewing service
before submission; only
then can a
proper review be performed. most sentences
contain grammatical and/or spelling
mistakes or are not
complete
sentences.
◆
as presented, the writing
is not acceptable for the journal.
there are pro
blems with sentence structure, verb tense, and
clause
construction.
◆
the english of
your manuscript must be improved before
resubmission. we str ongly suggest that
you obtain assistance
from a colleague
who is well-versed i
n
english or whose native language is
english.
◆
please have someone
competent in the english language
and
the subject matte r of your paper go over the
paper and
correct it. ?
◆
the quality of
english needs improving.
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