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苏轼《春日》:“ 鸣鸠乳燕寂无声，日射西窗泼眼明。午醉醒来无一事，只将春

睡赏春晴”;元

高明《题青山白云图》:“昨夜山中宿雨晴，白云绿树最分明。茅

庐早起无他事，去看南溪新水生”。

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第三句以“无端”二字作起，所以示于首二句外，忽插入他意也。

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李商隐《为有》:“为有云 屏无限娇，凤城寒尽怕春宵。无端嫁得金闺婿，辜

负香裘事早朝”; 宋

?

张咏《雨夜》:“帘幕萧萧竹院深，客怀孤寂伴灯吟。无端一

夜空阶雨，滴破思乡万里心”。

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用“依旧”、“犹还”等字以呼应之。

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韦庄《金陵图》:“江雨霏霏江草齐

六朝如梦鸟空啼 。无情最是台城柳，依旧烟笼十里堤”; 宋

?

张泌《寄人》: “别梦

依依到谢家，小廊回合曲栏斜。多

情只有春庭月，犹为离人照落花”。

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法: “最是”二字用在第三句首，与前法小异。

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韩愈《初

春》:“天街小雨润如酥，草色遥看近却 无。最是一年春好处，绝胜烟柳满皇都”;

清

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孙原湘《画梅》:“新年无客到山家，雨洒幽窗鼎沸茶。最是称心清绝事，对梅

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第

43

法

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第三句首用一“纵”字或“任”字、“总”字，而第四句则或用

“只”字、“终”字、“亦”字、“也”字、“犹”字、“又”字等以呼应之。

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司空曙《江村即事》:“罢钓归来不系 船，江村月落正堪眠。纵然一夜风吹

去，只在芦花浅水边”;李商隐《代赠》:“东南日 出照高楼，楼上离人唱石州。总

把春山扫眉黛，不知供得几多愁”; 宋

?

郭震《老卒》:“老来弓箭喜离身，说著沙

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法: “纵”字用在第三句第三字者。

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杨凌《明妃曲》:“汉国明妃

去不还，马驮弦管向阴山。匣中 纵有菱花镜，羞向单于照旧颜”;明

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赵师秀《采药

荫”。

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法: “纵”字用在第四句首者。

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王维《少年行》:“出身仕汉羽林

郎，初随骠骑战渔阳。孰知不向 边庭苦，纵死犹闻侠骨香”

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1-28

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法

第

法

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四句旋转而下，第 四句有一二字与第一、二句相复者，而句首并多用

“却”字。

紫竹情

districts under the jurisdiction of great thanks, South of the River,

River North, Mao Ta, 6 towns, less than 5 km from the enemy town of

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being, Sheng diwei forces are often deployed at dawn, Mao Ta, Sheng Tang

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紫竹殷殷映我心，参差月影落疏金，

诗花虽老春光瘦，却依紫竹翠华音。

第

2

法

:

或 四句，或三句，与第一、二句俱有相复之字，而与前一法稍异。

娇花戏水

幽花碧水水云仙，摘朵花儿入墨妍。

水弄花儿花更灿，娇花出水美连连。

第

3

法

:

第 三、四两句，轱辘而下，故第四句必有一二字与第三句相复，而又

用“还”、“又”等字 以紧系之，而第三句或先用“已”字以启其意。

草飞草长

草色朦胧月拢纱，红云飞渡濡芳华。

清辉已醉兰花指，寂寞兰花又倚霞。

第

4

法

:

与 前一法同，故三四两句必有复字。特前一法为尤整齐耳。

鸳鸯蝴蝶

月上兰舟染墨池，清辉碧水两相宜。

虽无蝴蝶鸳鸯梦，却有鸳鸯蝴蝶诗。

第

5

法

:

首 二句与末二句作今昔之比较，故首二句多有“去岁”、“去年”等

字，而三句多有“今年 ”、“今日”等字，而首二句与末二句又必有相复之字，以

见呼应。

寂寞之草

去年翠草俏玲珑，万紫千红左右弓。

今日虽衔珠玉泪，任谁可拂笑临风。

第

6

法

:

亦 首二句与末二句作今昔之比较者，故首二句多用“前年”、“昨

日”等字，而第三句则用 “今日”、“今朝”等字，惟不以复字作呼应，斯与前法

差异耳。

日日欢歌

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,

和风袅袅入心田

.

今朝喜鹊唧唧叫

,

妙曲佳音伴尔颠

.

第

7

法亦首二句与末二句作 今昔之比较者，但于第三句用“今日”、“如今”

等字，而首句则不用“昔年”、“去岁 ”等字，然其实指往日之意，固隐含于其中

也。

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River North, Mao Ta, 6 towns, less than 5 km from the enemy town of

shengze, only separated by a wide range of XI Bai Yang. For the time

being, Sheng diwei forces are often deployed at dawn, Mao Ta, Sheng Tang

Hong Kong fringe areas, and sometimes invasive South of the River, at

岁月如秋

细数年轮宛若秋，诗囊已老墨华收。

如今只在眉梢处，描个开心浅笑眸。

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起舞弄清影

一曲拨开几度秋，芊芊媚指翠华收。

如今相伴青青鸟，起影临风玉影酬。

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清清梦

亭台轩榭碧波中，流水小桥相映红。

如今唯有清清梦，点翠心屏入尔瞳。。

第

8

法第三句用“只今”、“惟有”四字作起，与前法小异 。

小月弯弯

溪水潺潺映故知，一弯小月入清池。

只今仍有幽幽意，摇出荷香玉影诗。

第

9

法

:

以 “如相问”三字置第三句后，其所问者何事，不必说明，但观其第

四句答词，