时间作文之按时间顺序写的英语作文
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按时间顺序写的英语作文
【篇一:英语作文
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时间顺序】
evolution of confucianism
and its influence
confucianism, which dominated chinese culture over
2000
years, has distinct characters
that influenced chinese science
and
economic development profoundly in two stages. it
is
helpful to learn chinese culture
through those characters.
the first stage is among bc 3rd to ac 12th. in
this period, the
confucian scholars
make numerous efforts to propagate the
confucian sprits which advocate
benevolence and
righteousness.
government didn’t forced people to believe
confucian. its binding force comes from
moral power rather
than ruling power.
scientists and businessmen have freedom
to pursue technology and wealth that
was significant in the
development of
science and economic. benevolence and
righteousness, which advocated by
confucianism, structured a
moral system
to prevent excessive greed and violence in
academia and business. confucianism is
a key factor that
leaded to the
prosperity of chinese science and economic
during the period.
confucianism turned to the second
stage when the
development of economic
had threatened the domination of
confucianism in the southern song
dynasty (1127-1279). the
confucian
scholars gradually accepted the neo-confucianism
submitted by a famous confucian scholar
zhu xi, which
focused on perishing
normal desire and called on people to
loyal to emperor. government took neo-
confucianism as
“bible” .penalty would
be given when anyone disobeyed the
doctrine of neo-confucianism. pursuing
technology and wealth
would be seem as
greed and would be prohibited in the
doctrine of neo-confucianism. since
then, confucianism has
become the
shackles of chinese people and lead to the
depression of economic and
science.
【篇二:实用英语写作技巧
第十二单元
组织段落方法
——
时间顺序法和空间顺序法】
实用英语写作技巧
第十二单元组织段
落方法
——
时间顺序法和空间
顺序法<
/p>
组织段落的常见方法有:
1
)时间顺序;
2
)空
间顺序;
3
)重要性
顺序和;
4
)熟悉度顺序。在前几单元,我们曾提到写叙述段落和过
程分析时用时间顺序,写描述段落时用空间顺序。在这一单元里,
我们将着重
讨论这两种组织方法。另两种方法
——
重要性和熟悉度
顺序
——
将在第
19<
/p>
单元讨论。
12
.
1
时间顺序法
段落内组织细节的最简单最常见的方法是时间顺序法(
time
order
organization
)。时间顺序通常用于
叙述和过程分析
——
先发生什么,
然后
怎样,再然后怎样,等等。正如我们在示范段落
9
-
1
和示范段
落
11
-
1
所看到的一样。其实在你的生活中你经常
运用这种方法。
你也许曾经告诉你父母在学校里发生的事情。你也许向老师或同学
叙述过你是怎样做一个实验的。这些用的都是时间顺序。
12
.
2
关
于如何写时间顺序段落的建议
1
)写下你要记录的事件或步骤,然后按照时间顺序排列
2
)确定你的写作目的,然后写出带有中心思想的主题句
3
)从你列举的事件或步骤中删除与中心思想无关的细节
4
)使用
“first
,
then
,
the
next step”
等等列举符号把细节连接起来
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.
3
空
间顺序法
段落组织的另一方法是空间顺序法(
space
order
organization
)。
空间顺序主要用于描述,正如我们在示范段落
10
-
1
和示范段落
10
-
2
所看到的。空间顺序和时间顺序一
样,是生活中经常使用的方法。
你也许曾在信中向你父母描述你的学院,或向你的同学描
述一个风
景区。
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.
4
关于如何写空间顺序段落的建议
按照你想让你的读者了解你要描绘的场面的方式移
动
——
例如,从
左到右,或从背景到前
景,或按顺时针方向,等等。
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.
5
综合运用空间顺序和时间顺序
有时候,尤其在描写参观时,有必要同时运用空间顺序和时间
顺序,
以增强段落的统一性。
示范段落
12-1
we enjoyed our visit to dr hassans
house
,
perched high up
on a hill
.
walking
up the long driveway
,
we
approached the
huge bronze
door
.
a butler was standing
in the open doorway
,
ushering
guests into the house
.
going
in
,
we passed the
oak
-
pannelled library and
the formal dining room before we
arrived at the
ballroom
,
where the reception
was being
held
.
under three
sparkling chandeliers
,
more
than a hundred
people were enjoying
champagne
,
hors doeuvres and
good
conversation
.
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.
6
示
范段落分析
主题句:
we enjoyed our visit to
dr hassans house
.
时间空间顺序:
driveway→
door→house→library→diningroom→ballroom
exercise
12
-
1
directions
:
arrange the
sentences into a
paragraph
,
using
the time order and adding the necessary
listing signals
.
—
she never had a birthday
party and she was twenty
-
one
year sold
.
—
the party was
really a successful one
.
—
we planned to
serve fruit punch and
coffee
.
—
we planned
entertainment
.
—
we carefully made a guest
list
.
—
we planned a surprise party
for mary recently
.
—
we included
many of her friends from
school
,
a few of her
friends from her
neighbourhood
,
and all of her
brothers and
sisters
.
—
a boy did mayic
tricks skillfully
;
another
boy played the
guitar
well
.
—
we also wanted chicken
sandwiches
,
a birthday cake
with
twenty
-
one
candles
,
and ice
cream
.
—
we especially enjoyed the
group singing
.
<
/p>
________________________________________
______________
_________________________
_____________________________
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____________________________________________
_____________________________________________
_________
______________________________
__
exercise
12-2
directions
:
narrate an
incident from your own childhood in
which you behave in a way you later
regretted
,
using time
order
.
___________________________
___________________________
____________
__________________________________________
< br>_______________________________________________ _______
________________________________
______________________
_________________
_______________
exercise
12
-
3
directions
:
narrate one of
your trip
,
either by
bike
,
by bus or
bytrain
,
combining
time order and space order
.
___________________________
___________________________
____________
__________________________________________
< br>_______________________________________________ _______
________________________________
______________________
_________________
_______________
【篇三:写好英语作文的五个步骤】
写好中考英语作文的五个步骤
导读:书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查,涉
及篇
章结构、句子构成、短语使用和单词拼写等多方面内容,以下就中
< br>考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导:
一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式
时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时
。说
明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比
等。
如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。
如
ago
,
last…——
过去时
next
,
in…——
将来时等
人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。
例如:
thanks to the
teachers
,
we have improved
our english
。
其中
we<
/p>
和
our
就是人称的统一。
格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点