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典
型
病
句
四级作文错误主要集中在词汇和句子结构方面，语法规则的乱用也很普遍。
（一）词汇错误
四级作文的词汇错误包括词性误用、选词不当和拼写错误。
1.
词性误用
词性误用是四级“
2
分段、
5
分段、
8
分段”作文中最常见的错误，英语基础差的考生
在 写作时常常根据单词的汉语意思随意使用各种词性的词作英语句子的各种成分。例如：
考生病句：
(1) Become a superwoman is my dream.
(2) A very important reason is that take exercises is good for your health.
(3) How can we be succeed?
(4) Students should not only study hard, but also ability training.
(5) Migrant workers often share their happy and sadness.
修改处理：
(1) To become a superwoman is my dream.
(2) A very important reason is that taking exercises is good for your health.
(3) How can we be successful?
(4) Students should not only study hard, but also develop their abilities.
(5) Migrant workers often share their happiness and sadness.
病因诊断：
部分考生对英语句子成分和词性之间的关联 缺乏清楚的认识。
一般而言，
英语句子的主
语和直接宾语只能由名词、代词、数词、现 在分词形式、不定式以及
What…
或
whether
…
等
引导的名词性结构来充当。
英语句子中的谓语必须由动词或动词词组来充当。
英语句子的定语可以由形容词、
名词、
分词、
不定式以及定语从句来充当。
英语句子的 状语则可以由副词、
副词性结构以及状语从句来充当。
2.
选词不当
选词不当也是四级作文中很普遍的问题，每个分数段的考生都不同程度地存在。例如：
考生病句：
(1) The big two students are interested in on-line games.
(2) To be a three good student is a symbol of achievement for Chinese students.
(3) The traffic in some big cities is becoming more and more crowded.
(4) My grandpa still likes seeing books.
修改处理：
(1) The sophomores are interested in on-line games.
(2) To be an all-round student is a symbol of achievement for Chinese students.
(3) The traffic in some big cities is becoming more and more heavy.
(4) My grandpa still likes reading books.
病因诊断：
部分考生的词汇量、词汇搭配、
同义词和近义词区分等方面的薄弱是导致写作时选词不
当的主要原因。例
(1)
的
big two students
表示“大二学生”，中国人能看懂，但 却让外国人
费解，是典型的“汉式英语”。例
(2)
的
a three good student
表示“三好学生”，也是典型
的
“汉式英语”
。< br>例
(3)
中
crowded
表示街道、
房间等地方拥挤，可以说
“
The street is crowded.
”
，
但不能说“
The traffic is crowded.
”。
例
(4)
中
seeing
明显是
reading
的误用。
3.
拼写错误
拼写错误在四级“
2
分段、
5
分段、< br>8
分段”作文中也较常见。例如：
考生病句：
(1) Study in British universities depends on weather you can pass IELTS or not.
(2)
Because
young
people
are
our
future
hopes,
we
should
provide
them
with
good
enviranment.
(3) The little boy weared a white shirt.
修改处理：
(1) Study in British universities depends on whether you can pass IELTS or not.
(2)
Because
young
people
are
our
future
hopes,
we
should
provide
them
with
good
environment.
(3) The little boy wore a white shirt.
病因诊断：
考生对某些单词或词组的正确拼写记忆不牢或粗心大意，在考试时产生笔误。
（二）语法错误
语法错误在四级“
2
分段、
5
分 段、
8
分段”的作文颇为常见。四级作文的语法错误主
要包括时态混用、代词和冠词误 用、主谓单复数误用等。
1.
时态混用
一些考生在写作文时没有时空概念，想起什么时态便顺手拿来用在句子中。例如：
考生病句：
(1)
When
I
was
a
little
girl,
I
felt
that
teaching
is
very
happy
because
my
mother
’
s
pupils
loved her very much.
(2) Five months ago he was still nobody, but now he was becoming somebody.
修改处理：
(1) When I was a little girl, I felt that teaching was very happy because my mother
’
s pupils
loved her very much.
(2) Five months ago he was still nobody, but now he is becoming somebody.
病因诊断：
考生在写作文时没有考虑同一个英语句子的时态通常需要前后保持一致。
2.
代词和冠词误用
一些考生在写作文时会把代词和冠词误用。例如：
考生病句：
(1) Another actors think that abilities of themselves are of great importance.
(2) I often wonder whether they may become healthy or not when my parents get older.
修改处理：