上海中考英语作文范文 解析
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上海牛津版本中考英语作文
考前模拟作文范文含解析
范文一
Write
at
least
60
words
on
the
topic
experience
of
learning__
以“我学习
____<
/p>
经历”为题，写一篇不少于
60
个词
的短文，标点符号不占格）
从小到大，<
/p>
你一定有很多学习的经历。
请结合你自己的一个学习
经历，谈谈你是如何学学习中又获得了什么？
的，从
(
注
意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则
不予评分。
< br>）
词组提示：
be interested in sth;
work hard
make progress
give up; fail to do sth.
succeed in doing sth.
【解析】
本作文题是一个半命题作文，
通过审题可以找到此题目
的关键词是“学习”和“经历”
。我们首经历了什么。在结尾部
分可以写出通过这个学习经历获得了什么启发。
题目后面所给的
参考词汇可先需要补充完整标题，
以说明是学习什么的经历。
然
后应该比较充实地描写是如何学习的，在学习中运用到作文中
去。
My experience of
learning the piano
When
I
was
four
years
old
,
I
began
to
learn
to
play
the
piano . I started very young because I
wanted to be a pianist in the
future.
I played the piano about six hours a
day. Sometimes I failed
to make
progress though I had practised very hard. I never
give up
because I am sure my dream will
come true.
Now the piano has become my
good friend. When I play it, I
feel
like
we
are
talking
with
each
other.I
love
my
piano
so
much
because it has brought me a lot of
happiness, and confidence.
范文二
.Write at
least 60 words according to the given (
根据所给情境，写
一篇不少于
60
词的
回帖，标点符号不占格）
Mike
在
学校的英语学习论坛里发了一个帖子，请阅读他的帖子，
写一份回帖。
< br>
Reading problem
Mike
I know reading is very important in
English learning. But I can't read as
fast as most of my classmates and I
always fail to finish the reading part
in
time
in
English
tests.
I'm
very
worried.
What's
the
problem?
What
should I do?
【解析】这是一篇情境作文，要求
对某一帖子作出回应，因此写
话的内容必须要对应情境中给出的内容。情境中
Mike
描述了自
己阅读速度慢，
英语测验时完成不了阅读部分试题的困扰，
同时
给出了
两个关键问题
What's the problem?What should I
do?
这些
都为确定写话内容给出了提示，同学们可以围绕情境
中
Mike
描
述的问题进行分析，进而
提出解决的方法及建议。
Hi, Mike. In my
opinion, you have such a problem probably
because of improper reading habits.
And the best way to solve the problem
is to develop good
habits of reading.
First, you'd better avoid reading word by word.
Instead, focus on the main idea and the
key information. Second,
it's not wise
to stop reading when a new word appears. Learn to
use
context clues to find out the
meaning. What's more, timing yourself
while reading is a good way. In short,
I hope my suggestions will
benefit you.
If you practise a little
every day, your reading speed will be
greatly improved.
范文三
Write a story in at least 60 words
according to the given pictures.
【解析】
该题为看图写话，
要求根据图意讲故事而非对图片内容
谈感想。
写
作时只要尽量覆盖图片内容，
完整流畅地表达图意即
可。写作时
可以充分利用方框内提供的词汇。
There was a
burglary at the museum last week. A man broke
into it and stole a golden statue.
However, the security guard noticed him
when he got away.
The guard shouted,
guard called the police. The policeman
chased the thief to a yard
and hit him
with a stone. The thief fell down.
Finally, the thief was caught and he
was sent to prison for
stealing the
golden statue.
范文四
Write at
least 60 words on the topic
以
“
我爱我
家
”
为题，写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
(
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名
及其他相关信息，否则
不予评分。
）
Kind
；
have fun
Helpful
；
encourage
me
Warm
；
take care
of
【解析】
家在每个人的心目中都是最重要的港湾，
在这篇作文中，
你可以写父母对你的关心和爱护，
可以写你们一起度过的快乐时
光，
也可以写你为这个家所做
的事和对家的美好祝愿等，
你需要
在作文中表达出
“
我爱我家
”
的真情实感。
I have a happy family.
Although it is small, it is full of love.
There three people in my
family. My father is a Chinese teacher.
When I meet with difficulties, he
always stands by me and
encourages me
to overcome them. My mother is a nurse. She takes
good care of me and she cooks delicious
meals for us every day. In
our spare
time, we like traveling together and we really
have fun.
I love my family and I will
try my best to realize my dream to
make
my family proud of me!
范文五
Write at
least 60 words on the
(
带来了）更
多的可能（机会）
”
为题，写一篇不少于
60
个词的
短文，标点符号不占格）随着科学技术、艺术人文
等领域的飞速
发展，人们的生活状态发生了巨大的变化。根据你的生活经验，
选择某一个自己感兴趣的话题，谈谈你对此的认识。
提示：横线上可以填
WeChat,Ali-
pay,Reading
等。
【解析
】
这是一篇半命题作文，
我们首先要考虑的是在横线上填
写什么词，它应当是一个自己比较熟悉、又有话可写的主题词。
在思考
主题词的时候，
我们不仅要理解该命题中与主题词相关的
关键词
，
比如
more possibil
ities,
而且还要认真领会试题中的文字
提示。
provide more possibilities
在本题中既是<
/p>
“
提供了更多可能
性
”
的意思，又可以理解为
“
带来了
更多机会
”
，根据试题提示，
我们要结
合日常生活经验，
选择一个能够为人们的学习、
工作和
生活或带来变化、或带来便利、或带来体验的主题，可以参考提
示中的例
子：
We-Chat,Ali-
pay,Reading
等。
确定了
写作主题以后则需要围绕主题设计写作提纲，
可以从该主
题与我
们的学习或生活的关系入手，
从不同的角度展开，
比如
“
微
信
”
这一主题就可以涉及
“
微信
”
影响了人们的社交方式、拓展了
人们获取资讯的渠道以及增强
了商业模式的灵活性等等。
more
possibiliti
es
就是本篇作文的线索，
因此需要努力挖掘主题词所蕴
含的各种意义。
VR provides
more possibilities
VR, known as virtual
reality, has been the highest technology
nowadays and will lead to a completely
new lifestyle.
Currently, VR is mostly
used in the game industry. People get
very involved in the game and feel like
directly experiencing the
events that
are happening in the game. In this way, VR will
also be
helpful in study. It will be
possible to ask your teacher to explain
some difficulties just at home
Furthermore, VR can be used for
shopping. With VR technology, online
shopping will be more
trustworthy.
People can feel the products online just like what
they
feel in real life.
All
in all , VR will provide more possibilities for
study and
entertainment in our daily
life .