上海中考英语作文专题指导
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上海中考英语作文专题指导
一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意
”写作法
“四审”
:
一审标题文体格式。
这样可以为下面的写作,
如人称、
时态、
内容、格式等奠定基础;
二审人称。
如是以第一人称
I
或
we
为主还是以第二人称
you
或第三人称
she, he, it
或
they
为主;
三审时态。一般而言,写作时文章应多以现在时(包括一般
现在时、一般将来时、现
在完成时和现在进行时)或过去时
(一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时)
为主,
切忌时态混乱;
四审
内容。如有提示,应尽量按照所给提示来写,不可偏题
乱发挥,
可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述,
不可遗漏,
这是很重要
的一点,
一般文章按
who
,
when
,
where
,
what
,
how
< br>,
why
等要素展开。
“四注意”
:
一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾,一定要写开头结尾。当
然,开头和结尾的方式不能
太落于俗套,要有一定的新意,
一般一两句即可,结尾要点题,有所立意;
二注意句式要富于变化,不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于
单调,否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分,如可适当运
用
< br>if, when, although
等状语从句,
I
think / I hope / I
believe that
等宾语从句,如用定语从句必须有绝对把握;
三注意适当运用连接词,如
on
one
hand,
on
the
other
hand;
what
’
s more; however
< br>等,这样使文章更有层次、
更富逻辑性,若语言和内容没问题
,
做到第二、三项
“注意”
就很
有希望拿组织结构分。
四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型,
尽量运用课本所学词
句,
坚决避免不正确的
“中国式英语”
,
更不能乱
“发明
”
,
一
般一篇文章能用
8
个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。
最后需要提醒考生的是,
中考作文要取得高分
,
p>
词数不能太少
也不能太多
,
笔者觉得
,
以
80
词左右为宜。另外,书写一定
要认真、工整,以免造成不必要的失分。<
/p>
二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析
1.
时态错误
2.
时间状语错误
3.
名词单复数错误
4.
动词误用
5.
语态错误
6
.
词性误用
7.
介词误用
8
.
某些搭配和惯用法误用
中考英语总复习专项训练题
F
写作专项训练
A.
中考英语热门写作话题
1.
关于学习
Write a
passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
How to learn English
well
”
.
(以“怎样学好英语”
为
题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文,标
点符号不占格。
)
Use the
following points as a reference.
(
以下内容供参
考
)
●
When
did
you
start
learning
English?
(in ...
/ ...
years ago)
●
How
do you learn English? (listen carefully, study
with a group, read English every day
...)
●
What is
difficult to learn? (listening, grammar ...)
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p>
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p>
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p>
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p>
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2.
关于兴趣
Write a
passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My
interest
”
.
(以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文
,标点符号不占格。
)
Use
the following points as a reference.
(
以下内容供参
考
)
●
What is your
interest?
●
Why
do you like it so much?
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___
___
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__
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___________________________
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p>
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p>
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p>
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p>
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p>
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___________________________
________________________
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p>
______
3.
关于写事
Write a
passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
Unforgettable
memories
”
.
(以“难忘的回忆”为题
写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文,标点符号不占格。
)
Use the following points as a
reference.
(
以下内容供参
考
)
●
What is your
unforgettable memory?
●
Why do you think it is unforgettable? <
/p>
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______
_______________
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__
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___________________________
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p>
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p>
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p>
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___________________________
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________________________________________________
p>
______
___________________________
________________________
______
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________________________________________________
p>
______
___________________________
________________________
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4.
关于计划
Write a
passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My plan for summer
holiday
”
.
(以“我的暑期
计划”
为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短
文,标点符号不占格。
)
Use
the following points as a reference.
(
以下内容供参
考
)
●
What
are
you
going
to
do
during
the
coming
summer
holiday?
●
Give
at least two points.
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p>
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p>
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___________________________
________________________
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p>
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___________________________
________________________
______
___
________________________________________________
p>
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___________________________
________________________
______
___
________________________________________________
p>
______
___________________________
________________________
______
___
________________________________________________
p>
______
5.
关于朋友
Write a
passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My good
friend
”
.
(以“我的好朋友
”为题写一篇不少
于
60
个词的短文,
标点符号不占格。
)
Use the
following points as a reference.
(
以下内容供参
考
)
●
Who is your
good friend?
●
What do you often do with him or her?
●
Why
do you regard him or her as a good friend?
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p>
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p>
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___
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p>
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___________________________
________________________
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________________________________________________
p>
______
___________________________
________________________
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___
________________________________________________
p>
______
6.
关于写人
Write a
passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My English
teacher
”
.
(以“我的英语
老师”为题写一
篇不少于
60
个词的短
文,标点符号不占格。
)
Use
the following points as a reference.
(
以下内容供参
考
)
●
Who is your
English teacher?
●
Do you like him or her?
●
Why do you like
him or her?
_______________
____________________________________
___
___
_________________________________________________
__
______
___________________________
________________________
______
___
________________________________________________
p>
______
___________________________
________________________
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___
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p>
______
___________________________
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___
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p>
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___________________________
________________________
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___
________________________________________________
p>
______
___________________________
________________________
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________________________________________________
p>
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___________________________
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p>
______
7.
关于英语
Write a
passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
I changed my ways of
learning English
”
.
(以“我
改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短
文,标点符号不占格。
)
p>
Use the following points as a
reference.
(
以下内容供参
考
)
●
How did you
learn English in the past?
●
Why do you change your ways of learning
English?
●
How do you learn English now?
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p>
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p>
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___
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p>
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___________________________
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p>
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___________________________
________________________
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___
________________________________________________
p>
______
___________________________
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___
________________________________________________
p>
______
8.
关于旅行
Write a
passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
An unforgettable
trip
”
. (
以“一次难忘的旅行
”为题写
一篇不少于
60
个词的短文,
标点符号不占格。
)
Use the
following points as a reference.
(
以下内容供参
考
)
●
Where did you
go?
●
What did
you do during that trip?
●
Why do you
think it is unforgettable?
____________
_______________________________________
______
______________________________________________
_____
______
___________________________
________________________
______
___
________________________________________________
p>
______
___________________________
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___
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p>
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___________________________
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___
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p>
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___________________________
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___
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p>
______
___________________________
________________________
______
___
________________________________________________
p>
______
___________________________
________________________
______
___
________________________________________________
p>
______
9.
关于动物
Write a
passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My
favourite
animal
”
.
< br>(以“我最喜欢的动物”为题
写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文,标点符号不占格。
)
Use the following points as a
reference.
(
以下内容供参
考
)
●
What
’
s your
favourite animal?
●
Why do you like it so much?
_______________________________________
____________
______
_______________
____________________________________
___
___
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__