上海中考英语作文专题指导

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上海中考英语作文专题指导


一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意 ”写作法



“四审”


:



一审标题文体格式。


这样可以为下面的写作,


如人称、


时态、


内容、格式等奠定基础;



二审人称。


如是以第一人称


I


或


we


为主还是以第二人称


you


或第三人称


she, he, it


或


they


为主;


三审时态。一般而言,写作时文章应多以现在时(包括一般


现在时、一般将来时、现 在完成时和现在进行时)或过去时


(一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时)


为主,


切忌时态混乱;



四审 内容。如有提示,应尽量按照所给提示来写,不可偏题


乱发挥,


可将有关内容提炼分解成几句展开叙述,


不可遗漏,


这是很重要 的一点,


一般文章按


who


,


when


,


where


,


what


,


how

< br>,


why


等要素展开。



“四注意”


:



一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾,一定要写开头结尾。当


然,开头和结尾的方式不能 太落于俗套,要有一定的新意,


一般一两句即可,结尾要点题,有所立意;



二注意句式要富于变化,不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于


单调,否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分,如可适当运


用

< br>if, when, although


等状语从句,


I think / I hope / I


believe that


等宾语从句,如用定语从句必须有绝对把握;



三注意适当运用连接词,如


on


one


hand,


on


the


other


hand; what


’


s more; however

< br>等,这样使文章更有层次、


更富逻辑性,若语言和内容没问题

,


做到第二、三项


“注意”


就很 有希望拿组织结构分。



四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型, 尽量运用课本所学词


句,


坚决避免不正确的

“中国式英语”


,


更不能乱


“发明 ”


,


一


般一篇文章能用


8


个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。



最后需要提醒考生的是,


中考作文要取得高分


,


词数不能太少


也不能太多


,


笔者觉得


,


以


80


词左右为宜。另外,书写一定


要认真、工整,以免造成不必要的失分。< /p>



二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析



1.


时态错误



2.


时间状语错误




3.


名词单复数错误




4.


动词误用





5.


语态错误




6


.



词性误用




7.


介词误用




8


.



某些搭配和惯用法误用





中考英语总复习专项训练题




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写作专项训练



A.


中考英语热门写作话题



1.


关于学习



Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic


“


How to learn English well


”


.


(以“怎样学好英语” 为


题写一篇不少于


60


个词的短文,标 点符号不占格。


)



Use the following points as a reference. (


以下内容供参


考


)


●



When


did


you


start


learning


English?


(in ...


/ ...


years ago)


●


How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study


with a group, read English every day ...)


●



What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar ...)

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2.


关于兴趣



Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic


“


My


interest


”


.


(以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于


60


个词的短文 ,标点符号不占格。


)



Use the following points as a reference. (


以下内容供参


考


)


●



What is your interest?


●



Why do you like it so much?


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3.


关于写事



Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic


“


Unforgettable


memories


”


.


(以“难忘的回忆”为题


写一篇不少于


60


个词的短文,标点符号不占格。


)



Use the following points as a reference. (


以下内容供参


考


)


●



What is your unforgettable memory?


●



Why do you think it is unforgettable? < /p>


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4.


关于计划



Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic


“


My plan for summer holiday


”


.


(以“我的暑期 计划”


为题写一篇不少于


60


个词的短 文,标点符号不占格。


)



Use the following points as a reference. (


以下内容供参


考


)


●



What


are


you


going


to


do


during


the


coming


summer holiday?


●



Give at least two points.


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5.


关于朋友



Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic


“


My good friend


”


.


(以“我的好朋友 ”为题写一篇不少


于


60


个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。


)



Use the following points as a reference. (


以下内容供参


考


)


●



Who is your good friend?


●



What do you often do with him or her?



●



Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?


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6.


关于写人



Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic


“


My English teacher


”


.


(以“我的英语 老师”为题写一


篇不少于


60


个词的短 文,标点符号不占格。


)



Use the following points as a reference. (


以下内容供参


考


)


●



Who is your English teacher?


●



Do you like him or her?


●



Why do you like him or her?



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7.


关于英语



Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic


“


I changed my ways of learning English


”


.

(以“我


改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于


60


个词的短


文,标点符号不占格。


)



Use the following points as a reference. (


以下内容供参


考


)


●



How did you learn English in the past?


●



Why do you change your ways of learning English?



●



How do you learn English now?

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______





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8.


关于旅行



Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic


“


An unforgettable trip


”


. (


以“一次难忘的旅行 ”为题写


一篇不少于


60


个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。


)



Use the following points as a reference. (


以下内容供参


考


)


●



Where did you go?


●



What did you do during that trip?



●



Why do you think it is unforgettable?


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9.


关于动物



Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic


“


My


favourite


animal


”


.

< br>(以“我最喜欢的动物”为题


写一篇不少于


60


个词的短文,标点符号不占格。


)



Use the following points as a reference. (


以下内容供参


考


)


●



What


’


s your favourite animal?


●



Why do you like it so much?



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___ ___





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