篇

（一）

fire prevention on campus

1.

前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失

2.

分析火灾发生的原因

3.

作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生

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审题概述

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这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重 点即

在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然

< br>后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。

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第一段，主要概述；第二段，说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。

【范文】

fire prevention on campus

people are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in

recent years. in each of these accidents, heavy casualties were

reported

–

houses were burned down, students lost their lives,

and properties were damaged. faced with such a chilling fact,

people keep asking, “what on earth results in these repeated

tragedies?”

a brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to

be the leading causes. for example, three of these fires were

caused by the students’ use of electri

c water-heaters. as

students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are

rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one

is around to turn off the power. in other cases, fires were also

caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.

since most of these disasters could have been prevented if

proper precautions had been taken, students should be better

educated on the importance and measures of fire control. the

following three reminders are of particular importance for us

students: first, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. second,

double-check c andles, heaters, stoves and other electric

appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before

leaving rooms. lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.

◇第一段思路点评：概述并引入下文

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1

）此句

what on earth results in these repeated tragedies?

常可作为过渡句，引出下文

（

2

）注意 描述有关火灾客观事实，多使用被动语态，如

are

alarmed by

，

were reported

，

were burned down

，

were

damaged

，

faced with

。

◇第二段思路点评：论述 火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器，还有造

成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂 ◇语言点提示：

electric water- heaters

电热水器

◇第三段思路点评：详述预防火灾的三点措施，注意使用连接词语

fir st, second, lastly

。

◇语言点提示：

take precautions

采取预防措施

fire extinguisher

灭火器

（二）

enhance awareness to guard against campus thefts

1.

校园盗窃案件时有发生

2.

物品被盗的原因

3.

学生如何加强防盗意识

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审题概述

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这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段， 主要

陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的

< br>原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。

【范文】

enhance awareness to guard against campus thefts

“if you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to

wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular

joke

among students. obviously, campus thefts have become

increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before.

and it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with

their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses,

pre-paid ic cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. in

short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.

what makes students the easy targets? the reasons are not

hard to find. but i believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-

theft alertness is the most important. for lack of alertness, the

students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open

during sleep at noon or at night in summer. for the same

reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or

by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before

they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. these acts

undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-

fingered monsters.

in order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay

on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around

often makes a big difference. to be more specific, the students

should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. put

it in the bank instead. besides, do not leave any valuable items

unattended. take them whereve

r you go. in addition, it’s

advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with

other students in the dorm and

neighbouring dorms.

◇第一段思路点评：陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况

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it seems that

此句型表示一种可能性

◇第二段思路点评：说明被盗原因

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what makes students the easy targets?

此句引出下文

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anti -theft alertness

防盗意识

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lack of alertness

缺乏警惕

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light -fingered

小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的

◇第三段思路点评：阐述如何加强防盗意识

◇语言点提示：注意关联词语

in the first place

，

besides

in

addition

的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。

（三）

how will our life go on without internet?

1.

网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活

2.

很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行

3.

你对网络依赖症的看法

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审题概述

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本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段，侧重简

述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利。第二段，详述网络与人们生活的

紧密度。第三段，论 述对网络依赖的观点。

【范文一】

how will our life go on without internet?

if asked whether the internet is the greatest discovery of the

20th century, my answer would be yes. the internet has drawn

the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams,

and provided modern people with a great many conveniences

and a brilliant life.

today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the

internet.

governments publish their latest policies and decisions online

for worldwide recognition. political campaigns are often done

online to gain wider public support. companies and

enterprises resort to the internet for more business

opportunities rand potential customers home and abroad.

universities and researchers turn to the internet if they’d seek

international cooperation or funding. common folks like us

also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for

communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.

true, the power of the internet is all pervasive and its many

negative effects are already visible. for example, internet

addicts tend to withdraw to their own

fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person.

children are exposed to online pornography and violence.

internet frauds are an everyday occurrence.

in view of all this, you are advised to use the internet with

wisdom. keep it at a safe distanceand never lose yourself.

◇第一段思路点评：综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个

长句足矣。 第一句用

if

引导的条件句引出

“

网络

”

话题，第二句概述

< br>网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。

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has drawn…, realized, and provided

此为谓语连动式的运用。

◇第二段思路点评：详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述 ，后

分述。

◇语言点提示：

resort to

借助、诉诸、求助于

◇第三段思路点评：先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。

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negative effects

副作用、反面作用

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2

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add icts

成瘾者、依恋者

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fantasy world

虚拟世界、虚幻世界

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4

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porn ography

色情表演、色情作品

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5

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fra ud

欺骗、诈骗

【范文二】

as a primary source of information as well as an efficient

means of

communication, the internet offers people a colourful and

convenient life. just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a

brilliant and easy life that could not be

achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting

relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies,

conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.

for its convenience, the internet has attracted people like

magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable.

to them, life can’t go on without it. every day millions of people

spend hours on end surfing the internet. they are obsessed

with it so much so that they forget many other important

for me, i don’

t approve of uestrained internet

reliance. although the internet is a gift of the technological

revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should

never let it control our life. the internet absolutely doesn’t

mean the whole world to us. instead, we should guard against

its negative effects. to those internet addicts, i would add:

“self

-control can make or break your life. with proper use, the

internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”

【篇二：四级英语作文训练】

（一）

fire prevention on campus

1.

前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失

2.

分析火灾发生的原因

3.

作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生

●

审题概述

●

这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时 重点即

在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然

后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段，主要概

述；第二段， 说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。

【范文】

fire prevention on campus

people are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in

recent years. in each of these accidents, heavy casualties were

reported

–

houses were burned down, students lost their lives,

and properties were damaged. faced with such a chilling fact,

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