北京中考英语作文范文分类精华篇
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中考作文集锦
1.
作文写作思路
中考常考问题及形式:
1.
中考作文常见文体:夹叙夹议
2.
中考作文常见形式:写回信;中英提示写作,话题类作文。
写作原则:
1231
原则(
1
句问候,
2
句概括来信中的问题,
3
条建议及建议原因,<
/p>
1
句祝福)
3.
写作能力之外的得分因素:字迹、分段
4.
写作注意以下几点:避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己
熟悉的句型。注意
长短句交错,几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板长短句交错使用
(
注意:
应突出主题句;长句子并非越长越好
< br>)
。
【阅卷关注】
阅卷关注哪几点
——
一、要点:全部图片或问题(要点决定分
/
语言准确)
;
二、单词:提示词语全用上
+
单词拼写(字数达标
/
标点符号和大小写
/ fourteen
等
数字)
;
三、
语法:
高级
(多用句型
/<
/p>
适当加点谚语)
+
语法出错
(三单、
时态、
避免
Chi
nglish
)
;
< br>四、卷面:书写规范(过渡词可使上下文连贯)
+
不要求
漂亮但要求工整。
作文分类击破
【一、写人记事类】
(感恩
/
感谢朋友老师父母、难忘经历、微笑、鼓励、毕业感想、暑期计划等)
【
p>
01
参考范文
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适用于感恩
/
感谢、难忘经历、最喜欢的老师
/
朋友等:
】
My
life
in
middle
school
will
come
to
the
end
soon.
During
the
past
three
years, my English
teacher gave me so much help that I will never
forget her.
I
was not good at English, I tried my best to learn
it but I couldn‟t get good
grades,
so
I
decided
to
give
it
up.
My
English
teacher
knew
that,
she
not
only
encouraged me to go on
learning but also helped me with my English after
class.
With her help, I made great
progress.
I
was
moved
by
her
and
I
was
really
thankful
to
her.
Now
I
feel
more
confident than before. I‟m sure I can
le
arn English very well in the future.
【
02
参考
范文
----
适用于
难忘的学校活动<
/p>
,
、鼓励、合作、坚持不懈的精神等
:
】
During the
three years, our school has held various
activities, among which the
activity of
climbing Xiangshan leaves me the deepest memory.
Last term, my classmates and I had a
school trip to Xiangshan Park. There, we
were divided into groups and the first
group that topped the mountain would win
a big prize. Our group tried our best
to climb as quickly as possible. But soon I
felt
dizzy
and
was
out
of
breath.
Noticing
this,
my
teammates
came
to
me
immediately.
Some
of
them
gave
me
candies
so
that
I
could
get
more
energy.
Others carried the
bag for me so that I could climb the mountain
easily… “You
can do it!”
everyone
encouraged me. At
that moment,
I
felt
deeply moved and
really
powerful. At last, we were the first to top the
mountain.
This
activity
not
only
gave
us
a
chance
to
keep
our
body
fit
and
enjoy
the
beautiful scenery, but also let me feel
the power of teamwork. A united group can
bring us warmth and strength and can
lead us to success.
【
03
参考范文
----
感恩
父母
:
】
There‟s no
doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was
born. With their
care, I grow up
happily. So I think it is necessary to do
something special for them to
show my
gratitude.
Both of my parents love music. So it
would be a great idea to buy a wonderful
CD for them. Last Sunday,
I
went to a bookstore and chose one among the top
10.
While we were having dinner
together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With
great
joy, they gave me a warm hug and
a big smile. I felt very sweet.
I
was really proud that I did something for my
parents. Their smiles were the
best
encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do
things like this more often.
【
04
参考
范文
----
帮助他人、
志愿活动:
】
I think helping others is
important and necessary. Taking part in volunteer
work
is one of the greatest ways to
give a hand to those who need help. And I like it
very
much.
I
remember I helped the old people in the old
people‟s home last Saturday.
First,
I cleaned the room and the
windows for them because it was not convienient
for them
to do such thins.
What
‟
s more, I told them
some interesting stories, sang some English
songs for them and they moved to tears.
When it was time to say goodbye, I hugged
them and promised to see them again.
Everyone may have trouble
in life and our little kind act can make a big
difference
in
their
life.
In
fact,
helping
others
is
helping
ourselves.
I
will
do
the
same
in
the
future
because it can bring me and other people
happiness.
【
05 <
/p>
参考范文
----
喜欢的
hobby
、活动:
】
I
t is good to learn about
your school activities. Now I‟ll tell you about
mine.
At my school
we have many fun activities to take
part in. We have swimming,
basketball,
badminton, and ping pong. My favorite activity is
basketball. I play with
my friends
every day after school. Basketball is a team sport
where team-mates pass
the ball to each
other to throw it into a hoop for points. The team
with the most points
at the end of the
game wins. In basketball it is good to be tall
because it is easier to
score points.
I like to play basketball because it is
a team sport and it is also a good way to get
exercise. Basketball is also a good
game to learn how to work well with others.
【
06
参考范文
----H
obby
、读书类:
】
I have great interest in reading
magazines because I like reading many kinds of
articles in them, such stories, news,
science, jokes and so on. The stories give me life
lessons, the jokes make me laugh and
the news keep me knowing what hapens around
me. I
can get
lots of information as well as
enjoy a lot of beautiful pictures in
the
magazines.
I enjoy reading
magazines because they can not only help me study
better and
but also make me relaxed and
happy every day.
【二、给予建议类】
建议类作文写作
思路(
1231
)
(一句问候
、两句问题)
第一段:很高兴收到来信
针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受
主动提出给别人建议
第二段:
3
条具体建议及原因
第三段:提出希望和祝愿
开头句:表达同情理解
+
主动提建议
I understand your feelings
because I once had the similar problem as you do
now.
It‟s very common for students to
do sth. and many students have the same
problem
like you.
Let me
offer you some useful advice.
Here‟s my
advice.
My suggestions are
as follows.
建议类句型:
•
You are
supposed to do....
•
You'd better do ....
•
Why not/ don't
you do....
•
It's
a good idea to do....
•
If I were you, I would do...
结尾句:
•
I hope what I
said can be of some help to you.
•
Just
h
ave a try. I‟m looking forward to
hearing good news from you!
•
Try your best,
and you'll make great progress!