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2021年2月23日发(作者：四季无忧)

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析（一）

My View on Fake Commodities

1.

假冒

伪

劣商品的危害。

2.

怎样

杜

绝

假冒

伪

劣商品。

My View on Fake Commodities

Nowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of the market. Wherever you

are, whatever you do, it seems that you can hardly have fallen prey to them. In other words, it

is

highly

probable

that

you

have

bought

some

of

those

fake

goods

or

products

of

inferior

quality

。

Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society. On the

one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the

market.

On

the

other

hand,

the

prevalence

of

such

products

has

hindered

interpersonal

relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality. As a consequence, they have wasted

exhaustible resource

s, endangered people’s precious life and health, and in the long run eroded

public trust

。

Then,

what

should

be

done

to

do

away

with

fake

commodities?

To

start

with,

the

government needs to tighten its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies.

Secondly, honest businessmen should modify some long-accepted practices at the protection

of their intellectual property right. Most important of all, we consumers will have to do a better

job of learning how to distinguish between the genuine and the phoney and definitely say no to

the fake ones. In one word, the coordinated effort of the whole society will put an end to fake

commodities.

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二

）

Knowledge and Diploma

1.

目前社

会

上存在

这样

一

种说

法：文凭越高越吃香

< p>
;

2.

而有些人

则认为

文凭不 等于知

识

;

你

的

观

点

Knowledge and Diploma

It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people

identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also

tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist

a social reality

–

the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.

On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate

into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s ed

ucational

experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth

of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t

have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the

fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.

So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is

nothing

but

a

proof

of

a

short-

term

study

while

genuine

knowledge

needs

one’s

lifelong

devotion.

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析（

三

）

< p>

The Rise of Shanzhai Culture

1

1.

最近

兴

起了一股“山寨

热

”;

2.

你

如何看待山寨

现

象

●

审题概

述●

本文是一篇

论

述山寨

现

象以及人

< br>们

和

你对

此看法的文章。

第一段，

概

述方

兴< /p>

未艾的

山寨

热

。 第二段，

阐

述山寨

产

< br>品的

优势

以及

给

人

们带来

的好

处

。第三段，

论

述人

们

和

你对

山寨

现

象的

反

对

立

场

和

观

点，即山寨

产

品的非法性。

The Rise of Shanzhai Culture

The vast array of knockoff name-brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players,

have

made

“shanzhai”

the

hottest

word

of

the

year.

Now

we

wear

shanzhai

watches,

talk

through

shanzhai

cell

phones,

play

shanzhai

video

games,

use

shanzhai

computers,

even

watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic products to suggest a

copycat

version

of

inferior

quality,

shanzhai

now

suggests

to

many

Chinese

creativity

and

trendiness.

With

the

media

all

over

the

rise

of

shanzhai

culture,

public

opinions

are

clearly

divided.

Advocates

invariably

associate

it

with

innovation,

stylishness,

the

DIY

spirit,

open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation with innovation

—

a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually more functional and much

cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more

considerate

in

design.

Thanks

to

them,

more

people

at

the

grassroots

level

can

enjoy

the

benefit of modern technology.

However,

other

people,

including

myself,

hold

more

reserved

attitudes

towards

the

shanzhai fever. For all the popularity it has won, a copycat is a copycat. The mockery of the

prestige products not only steals their profits but also upsets market competition. Moreover,

shanzhai products thrive on the current legal loopholes. Under the disguise of anti-dominance

slogans, they make illegal profits by violating intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And

to top it off, the so-called innovation is only senseless talk as true innovation always faces huge

costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other people’s risks.

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四

）

< br>

It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy

1.

盗

版

软

件比比皆是

;

2.< /p>

盗

版

软

件猖獗的 原因

;

3.

如何打

击盗

版

软

件

●

审题概

述 ●

这

是一篇主要

论

述

盗

版

软

件猖獗原因和打

击盗

版

软

件的措施的文章。

第一段，

概

述

中

国盗

版

软

件泛

滥

的情

况

。第二段，重点分析

盗

版

< p>
软

件猖獗的主要原因。第三段，

侧

重

阐

述打

击盗

版

软

件的措施。

It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy

China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look

around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with pirated Kaspersky

anti-virus

programmes,

process

files

with

pirated

Microsoft

Office,

draft

3D

designs

with

pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated

Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and translators. It’s no exaggeration that p

irated software is

everywhere.

The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just

a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who

2

would

pay

for

an

authentic

copy?

Cheaper

prices

aside,

easy

access

is

another

important

factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time

and money searching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version?

Despite

these

apparent

benefits,

the

practice

of

software

piracy

should

be

banned,

because it represents unfair competition and by nature it’s a no

-win situation. But how? Two

approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance

their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And

legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so

that violations should be costly.

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析（

五

）

金融危机

1.< /p>

金融危机

给

各行各

业

都造成了一定影

响

;

2.

金融危机

对

大

学

生造成何

种

影

响

;

3.

作

为

大

学

生，

应怎样应对这种

影

响

.

●

审题概

述●

这

是一篇主要

论

述金融危机

与

大

学

生

关

系的文 章。第一段，

概

述金融危机

给

世界造

成的影

响

。第二 段，

论

述金融危机

给

< br>大

学

生

带来

的就

业

、

经济

等影

响

。第三段，

阐

述大

学

生面

对

金融

危机

带来

的影

响应

提高

专业

技能等。

Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students

Since

the

financial

crisis

swept

the

world,

the

global

economy

has

sunk

into

a

severe

recession. It’s hard to get through a day without hearing or reading news about the devastating

effects of the crisis: A world of companies go bankrupt, millions of employees are laid off,

high-return

investment

bubbles

burst,

and

huge

sums

of

loans

can

never

be

retrieved.

Its

impact on our daily life can be felt in all walks of life.

College

students

inevitably

fall

victim

to

this

pervasive

slump

as

well.

On

top

of

that,

internships and job vacancies are reduced to the minimum as companies keep shrinking. New

graduates find themselves hard to get a job, not to speak of a satisfactory one. What comes

next? Poor students will be hard-pressed if they find student loans unavailable any more. As a

result, some even cannot afford to continue their studies. Lastly, more students are probably

out there anxiously looking for part-time jobs now that they have to help cover their expenses in

this gloomy economy. Their innocence and eagerness might be taken advantage of by some

malicious business people, or even criminal gang.

In response to these threats, we students must act promptly and wisely. Since we definitely

will

be

facing

a

competitive

job

market,

it’s

crucial

that

we

submit

high

quality

resumes.

Therefore, we must commit more to our professional studies. Even do better, master more

relevant job skills as a double security. Furthermore, apply for scholarships and grants, as these

are still available and we don’t have to pay them back. As for the safety issues, trust our instinct

—there’s no free lunch in this

world. Anything that promises quick returns without much work is

a sure trap. Stay alert and protect ourselves.

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析（

六

）

志愿者活

动

1.

越

来

越 多的人

从

事志愿者工作

;

2.

志 愿者工作的社

会

意

义

< br>;

3.

作

为

大

学

生，

应该怎么

做

3

Volunteering actions

In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially

among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who

offered

service

for

Olympic

Games.

Actually,

an

increasing

number

of

people

become

volunteers every year in China

。

Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society.

Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in

Beijing

Olympic

Games.

Without them,

it

would

be

a

tough

task

to

hold

this

un- precedent

Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of

these games

。

As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities. By

participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills

and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we

should take this chance to learn and to grow.

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析（

七

）

< br>

大城市就

业还

是小城

镇

1.

很多的大< /p>

学

生

毕业

后留在 大城市工作；

2.

也有人

选择

到小城

镇开

始自己的

职业

生涯；

3.

结

合自己的

实际

情

况谈谈

自己的想法。< /p>

Want to be a small fish in a big pond or the other way round? Every graduate faces this

question when starting his career. A large number of college graduates prefer to stay in big

cities,which mean more experiences, more opportunities to see the big world and more space

for career development. At the sam e time, higher salary is another temptation

。

But some other graduates intend to start in small towns. Even though there may not be

many big companies, they can have a quieter and less competitive life. Another reason is that

they can be a big fish in a small pond. They can easily get the management’s attention and may

win promotion earlier

。

As far as I am concerned, I prefer to start in a metropolis like Shanghai. A good begin is

half the battle, and in Shanghai I can find a job in a big company where I can meet people from

different places and cultures. I will learn from them what I can not get from textbooks.

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析（

八

）

Should College Students Live on Campus

a.

< p>
有些人喜

欢

住在

学

校的宿舍，因

为

……

b.

有 些人喜

欢

住在校外，因

为

……

c.

我的看法

Should College Students Live on Campus

There are an increasing number of students who choose to live off campus. Parents and

university

administrations

understandably

reacted

differently.

They

voiced

concerns

about

security

and

the

threat

of

off-campus

lifestyles

getting

out

of

control.

However,

college

students have their own reasons for their choices

。

Some students prefer to live on campus for the following reasons. First, campus residents

are closer to classes, the library, and other resources, so they are more likely to succeed in

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college and complete their bachelor’s degree in four years. Furthermore, Living in a dorm is a

great

opportunity

to

meet

all

kinds

of

new

people

and

develop

relationships

with

them,

so

students

living

on

campus

are

more

sociable.

Last

but

not

the

least,

living

on

campus

is

cheaper

and

more

convenient.

Often

times,

off-campus

housing

is

more

expensive

than

on-

campus housing and while living on campus, you don’t have to worry about monthly rent

payments and utility bills

。

Some others choose to live off campus because they believe living off campus they are

more independent, with more privacy and a lot more quiet time. Living off campus gives them

freedom from those dorm rules and allow them to set their own. The extra space also means

that one can probably find a quiet place to study in the convenience of his own home

。

As for me, I’m a faithful supporter of the former group because I, living on campus myself,

have witnessed and enjoyed all the convenience and happiness of doing so. To me, living on

campus undoubtedly adds an important element to the complete college experience

。

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九

）

Pursuit of A Master’s Degree

a.

根据下

图

描述某校

毕业

< p>
生

毕业

意向的

变

化

b.

分析

选择读研

的

毕业

生

数

目增加的原因

c.

说

明

选择读研对个

人和社< /p>

会产

生的影

响

It is illustra

ted in the pie charts that graduates’ choices after graduation have experienced

much change. The number of students choosing to pursue a master’s degree and study abroad

grows several times over the decade

。

The

reasons

of

the

increasing

number

of

student

s

pursuing

a

master’s

degree

are

as

follows. First, with the number of college graduates growing each year, the situation in the job

market is getting tighter and tighter. The public awareness of the situation has created a surge

of interest in seeking a m

aster’s degree. Secondly, many cross

-national companies set a much

higher standard for new recruits than ever. It seems that the higher education you have, the

higher salary you may receive

。

Choosing to study for master’s degree will benefit the individu

als and the whole society as

well. The quality of Chinese intellectuals will be considerably enhanced, which in turn will boost

the progress of the whole society

。

< /p>

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Directions

: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Say

“Thank You”

to Parents. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.

很多的大

学

生

从

未跟父母道

过谢

2.

请说

明原因

3.

你

的建

议

According

to

a

recent

survey

involving

over

3000

undergraduates,

35%

of

university

students have never said “Thank you” to their parents. Their parents have done all they could to

bring them up in the past score of years, but have never been rewarded with gratitude

。

The

subjects

claim

such

reasons

as

follows.

First

and

foremost,

a

quarter

of

the

interviewed stu

dents regard it as parents’ duty to support them spiritually and financially. And it

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