中考英语作文真题版
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七、书面表达
（本题有
1
小题； 共计
20
分）
2015
嘉兴卷
76.
文明社 会，
从我做起。
请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一篇短文，
向校
刊
English Garden
投稿，倡导做文明人。
注意 ：
（
1
）短文必须包括所给图片的信息，合理想象并补全第
3
幅图片 的内容。
（
2
）必须谈谈你对此事的看法。
（
3
）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
（
4
）词数：
80~100.
短文首句
仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
短文首句：
Last Sunday afternoon,I went to the park with my cousin.
参考词汇：
果皮
skin
，踩在……上摔倒
slip
on
（
s lipped
，
slipped
）
，救护车
ambulance
_______________________________ _________________________________________
Possible versions
1
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. When we
were walking
around,we saw a boy eat a banana and throw the skin
on the as we were going to pick it up, a man slipped on the
skin. He was badly
hurt and couldn't move. We called 120.
Soon an
ambulance came and took him to the hospital.
It was really bad of the boy to do that! We must say no to this bad
behaviour. Everyone should care about his daily behaviour and follow
the social rules so that the world will he a better place. (93 words)
Possible versions
2
The story in the pictures shows a boys
’bad behaviour. One day, a
boy went to the park for a walk. He ate a banana and threw the skin on
the ground.A moment later,he came back. Without noticing the skin, he
slipped on it. He was hurt so badly that he couldn’t move. Someone
passed by and called 120. Soon an ambulance came and took him to
the hospital nearby.
七、书面表达
（本题有
1
小题，共计
20
分）
（
2015
台州卷）
76.
正 值毕业季，你们班级的“英语园地”在征集庆祝毕业活动方式的建议，以下是你们
组三位同学的想法及理 由，
请你根据这些信息写一篇英语短文，
并谈谈你自己的想法和理由。
注意：
（
1
）短文必须包括图片中的所有内容，可适当增加细节。
（
2
）文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
（
3
）词数：
80~100
。
（
4
）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
短文首句：
These
days,
students
in
our
class
are
discussing
the
ways
to
celebrate graduation.
have a party
to relax ourselves
plant trees
to make our
school beautiful
make a video
to record school life
—
Nancy
七、书面表达（
20
分）
(2016
宁波卷
)
76
．
（
20< br>分）
（2016•宁波）
“传递爱心，
服务他人”是文明社会所倡导的理念．< br>狮子会
（
the
Lions
）就是一个以此为宗旨的国际性服务团体 ．杨敏是狮子会的一名成员，多年来她一直
乐于助人．请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的
English World
栏目投稿，简要介绍
杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈你的观点和打算．
Ready to help others
Yang Min
Help others for years
Go to the old people’s home twice a month
（
cut hair
，
wash clothes
，
do some cleaning
）
Offer people umbrellas or raincoats on rainy days
Your
opinion…
Your
plan…
要求：
1
．短文内容必须包含表格所提供的要点，可适当发挥；
2
．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；
3
．词数：
80
﹣
100
（短文开头已给出，仅供选择使用，不计入总词数）
．
短文开头：
From time to time
，
we are moved by the people and things around
us
．
YangMin is one of the persons I admire most
．
．
As a member of the Lions
，
she has been helping others for many
years
．
She goes to the old people's home twice a month to cut hair
，
wash
clthes and do some cleaning for them
．
Besides
，
on rainy days she offers
people umbrellas or raincoats for free
．
I'm deeply moved by her story
．
I'm going to start with small things
around me
．
I plan to give books and colthes to children in poor
villages
．
What's more
，
I'll ask my parents and more friends to join me
．
Small action can make a big difference
．
Let's help those who need
help
．
．
【分析】
这是一篇图表作文．内 容是简要介绍杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈你的观点和打算．
时态
主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一 、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1
简要介绍杨敏 的事迹：帮助他人很多年，一个月去养老院一次，雨天免费提供雨伞或雨衣
2
你的观点和打算．
常用到的重点短语：
offer sb sth
给某人提供某物
start with
以…开始
what's more
再者
join sb
和某人一起
make a difference
有影响
【高分句型】
1
．①What's more，I'll ②ask my parents and more f
riends to join me
．
①what's more
再者
②ask sb to do sth
让某人做某事；
join sb
和某人一起
2
．
Small action can make a big difference
．
make a big difference
有很大的影响
3
．①Let's help those ②who need help!
①let's
do sth
表示提出建议．
②who
作为关系词的定语从句，
who
作为从句的主语，修饰先行词
those
．
【解答】
From time to time
，
we are moved by the people and things around
us
．
YangMin is one of the persons I admire most
．
As a member of the Lions
，
she has been helping others for many years
．
She goes
to the old people's home twice a month to cut hair
，
wash clthes and do some
cleaning for them
．
Besides
，
on rainy days she offers people umbrellas or raincoats
for free
．
（介绍杨敏的事迹）
I'm deeply moved by her story
．
I'm going to start with small things around me
．
I
plan to give books and clothes to children in poor villages
．
What's more
，
I'll ask my
parents and more friends to join me
．
【高分句型】
Small action can make a big difference
【高分句型】
．
Let's help those who need help!
【高分句型】
（你的观点和打算）
【点评】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．
注意文章文体、
人称和时态．
运用适当的短语表达中心思想，
增加作文的可读性．
完成提示词时也要符 合事实．
温
馨提醒：
考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，
有无拼写错误及标点 误用等．
这篇短文使用了
一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．
学习中注意总结，牢 记一些固定句式及短语，
写作
时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．
77
（
2013
台州卷）
对于“碰到作业困难 时是否向老师请教”，同学们持有不同
的观点，请你根据下表内容的提示，
用英语写一篇短文。
陈述同学们的观点及理由，并谈谈
你的观点及理由，发表在校园网的论坛上。
观点
向老师请教
不向老师请教
你的观点及理由：……(理由至少
2
条，不能重复已给的理由
)
理由
◆老师讲解得清楚，易于理解
◆增加与老师交流的机会
◆性格内向，羞于开口
◆怕被同学嘲笑
注意：①短文必须包括表中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
②开头已给出，不计人总词数，你只需接着写
③词数
80
～
100
个。
参考词汇：
explain clearly,
communicate with,
be laughed at
T
he students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers
far help with homework problems._ _________________________________________
76. One possible version ~
Here are the results of the survey in our group, we have
different ideas.
Sam prefers to ask teachers for help. Gina likes to surf the
Internet. And in Tom% opinion, he prefers to / would like to / likes to
/wants to/ discuss with his classmates. As for me, I prefer to / would
like to / like to /want to look up in the books/ get help from parents /
ask classmates to help me / look through the notebook...
That’s all. Thank you!
77. One possible version :
The
students
of
our
class
have
different
ideas
about
whether we ask teachers for help with homework problems. Those who
prefer to ask teachers for help think that teachers can explain clearly,
and it will be a good chance to communicate with teachers. However,
some disagree. On one hand, they are too shy to ask teachers for help.
On the other hand, they are afraid to be laughed at by others.