无味的意思-有关中秋的诗词

2021年1月31日发(作者：答辩决议)
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江苏高考英语作文常考题型模板

我省高考书面表达阅卷 方式（网上阅卷）
，采用两人判分取其平均值的方法，这样更能
客观地反映出考生的实际英语写 作水平。但是阅卷速度很快，一般
50
秒至
65
秒即可阅读
完一篇文章。对于非常好而且字迹又非常漂亮的作文。阅卷老师会给高分。

一、答题应试技巧

牢记“一式、两头、三写、四关”的应试要诀。一式，是关注文章 体裁，写对格式；两
头，即写好文章的开头和结尾；三写，是大小写、拼写和书写无误；四关，也就是过 好内容
要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关和习惯表达关。具体如下：

1.
注重审题，对写的内容做到心中有数。首先，应通过审题明确文章的体裁。其次，应注
重时态及语态，认 真琢磨其内容的英语表达方式，避免汉式英语。最后着手写时要注意
分段。

2. < br>内容要点是否齐全；句子语法（包括：时态、语态、用词、句法和结构格式等）是否正
确；词汇是 否准确多样；句式结构是否丰富多彩；逻辑关系词使用是否到位；是否合理
使用连接词和过渡性词语；标 点符号、英语字母大小写是否规范。

3.
在表达清晰明了的前提下适当使用有把握的复杂结构和高级词汇。

4.
注重英语习惯，使所写句子准确地道，注意表达时的切换，避免汉式英语。

5.
注重开头和结尾的技巧。

6.
新标准对写作的要求增加了情感因素，所以 发挥自己的观点时注重思想性，力图提高文
章思想内涵。

7.
注重书写， 追求卷面美观。书面表达属于主观性试题，阅卷老师的主观印象直接关系到
考生的得分高低。

8.
通读全文，检查疏漏。

忌：
书写潦草、
单词模糊不 清、
左右明显不齐、
随意涂改、
缺乏分段、
字数太多或太少。


二、考生要想“取悦”于阅卷老师应注意以下几个要点

1.
外 在美：字（字迹、字数、字体、字距）
；版面（整洁，忌超格、污迹、涂黑）
。

2.
结构美：分段（最好三段）一篇好的文章应有合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清晰。每< br>一段应有一个主题句和几个支撑句。写好首段是关键（开头写得好是获得高分
的基础）
；
深化充实中间拓展段（要紧紧围绕主题展开，不能涉及无关内容。
把
好结尾关（好的结 尾能起画龙点睛作用。结尾段写法很多：可以对前文观点发
表看法，明确表明自己的立场和态度；也可以 回到文章的开头段提出的中心论
点上，达到再次肯定和强调的效果。应从多个角度谈）
。

3.
词汇美：亮点（使用优美语句，但不是偏词、怪词，而是生动、集体形象的词语，并 且
要运用得正确、
得当。
如：
“
The
job
is
very
difficult
”
如果表达成：
“
The
job
is very challenging
”更能显示出考生的功底）

4.
句式美：每段使用一至两个较高级句型来表达可使全文增色，但不宜过多，以免出错。
常用的句 式：
what
从句；同位语从句；倒装句；
with
结构；插入语等。句子长
短相间，精彩句式的合理使用会使文章可读性更强；忌低级错误（主谓、时态
不一致、单词拼写 错误等）

5.
衔接美：
“有效地使用语句的链接成分，
使全文结 构紧凑”
是高考书面表达重要的评分依
据。段落之间要使用适当的过渡句；句子间要使用逻辑性 合理的衔接词，这样
文章结构紧凑、自然流畅，给人以上下贯通、一气呵成的感觉。


三、概括写作类

2014
年江苏英语高考首次采用新题型，读写任务型。该写作分为两部分：

第一部分要求用约
30
个词概括所给短文的要点，
文体主要以记叙文，
议论 文或说明文为主。

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第二部分以约
120
个词就短文某一主题谈论自己的经历并发表看法。
首先，
概括部分考查了学生的概括能力，
学生在概括的时候要注意语言的精炼，
要 点要
齐全。其次，阐述的理由或论据要简洁明了，层次分明。最后，对自己的观点要作出总结。

写作时要注意尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，
同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使
文章显得更有档次。

【常规模版】

第一段：概括文章要点，语言要精炼， 概括要全面，行文连贯，表达准确。概括时常用的
句式有
：

1
、记叙文类常用模版：

①
The author tells us a story about a ________that/who________.
②
The passage is a story about a ________that/who________.
e.g. The author tells us a story about a

kind man who cut a cocoon open in order to lessen the
pain of a butterfly when he saw it struggling out of the cocoon, only to find that it could never fly
because of his help.
2
、议论文类常用模版：

①
The passage highlights the importance of sth.
②
The essay/passage/author outlines ________.
③
The article gives the view that_____
should/shouldn’t
_____
（主题）
_____
（补充论据）
.
e.g. The passage highlights the importance of encouragement for students.







The essay/passage/author outlines the harmful effects of smoking.
3
、说明文类常用模板：

①
This article shows/tells us that________.
②
This article not only describes________ but also suggests________.
③
This article points out the common phenomenon____
（主题）
，< br>which_____
（补充解释）
.
e.g. The article tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop
good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.

第二段：写完概括后，用恰当的过渡语引出下 文；并根据要求进行分析或举例或说明自己
的看法。

一）
过渡语

1
、
记叙文的过渡语

(1)I have a similar experience.

(2)I also went through such an experience.

(3)This story reminds me of another story that happened to...

(4)This story reminds me of a similar experience of...

2
、
议论文的过渡语

表示赞同

(1)I agree with the statement that...

(2)I do/quite agree with the author...

(3)I’m for the writer’s idea that...

(4)I fully support the statement...

(5)I can’t agree more with
...


表示不赞同

(1)I
don’t agree with what the writer said/the
writer.

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(2)I’m strongly against the writer’s idea.

(3)This opinion sounds right/reasonable, but is hardly practical.

3
、
说明文的过渡语

(1)After reading the passage, I had a better understanding of...
二）根据要求进行分析或举例

①
This is common in
/among... Let’s take... for example.

②
As for me, I benefit a lot from...
③
The story sets me thinking.
④
I can’t agree more with t
he author.
三）说明自己的观点：

①
As far as I am concerned, ...
②
From my point of view, ...
③
In my opinion, ...

第三段：根据要求或启示，提出看法或如何解决该问题。常用的结论性词语有：

1. In conclusion, ...
2. To sum up, ...
3. In a word, ...

附范文：

1
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇
150
词左右的文章。

Once upon a time in a land far away
，
there was a wonderful old man who loved every
－
thing. Animals, spiders, insects...
One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon (
茧
) of a butterfly. He took it home.
A
few
days
later,
a
small
opening
appeared;
he
sat
and
watched
the
butterfly
for
several
hours
as
it
struggled
to
force
its
body
through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and
it could go no
farther.
Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly
then came out easily.
But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled(
萎缩的
) wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at
any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of
its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.
What the man in his kindness and haste did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly
to get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready
for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.
Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any obstacles, it would
cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.
【写作内容】

1
．以约
30
词概括短文内容要点；

2
．以约< br>120
词就
“
个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺
”
这一话题发表你 的看法，并包含以下要点：

(1)
你读了这个故事后的感受；

(2)
叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果；

(3)
假如你是父母一方，你会如何磨砺自己的孩子？

【写作要求】

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1
．可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中句子。

2
．文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。

The author tells us a story about a kind man who cut a cocoon open in order to lessen the pain
of
a
butterfly
when
he
saw
it
struggling
out
of
the
cocoon,
only
to
find
that
it
could
never
fly
because of his help.
The
story
sets
me
thinking.
Our
life
is
more
or
less
like
this.
Sometimes,
struggles
or
obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or obstacles that increase our
willpower and contribute to our success. Without these trials, we could never achieve our life goal
just as the butterfly did in the story.
Nowadays, with only one child in most families
，
parents do whatever they can to satisfy the
child’
s
needs
and
even
do
for
him
what
should
be
done
by
himself.
Consequently,
the
child
is
unable to look after himself without his parents' presence. Too much care from parents deprives
children
of
chances
to
grow
strong
by
conquering
obstacles.

Just
as
a
saying
goes,
“
Flowers
from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”

If I were a parent, I would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and that he
should
be
ready
to
face
any
difficulties.
Besides,
I
would
expose
him
to
the
hardships
in
life
instead
of
protecting
him
from
difficulties,
providing
them
with
chances
to
fight
for
his
bright
future by conquering challenges.
2
“When should I begin to acquire good habits?”a young boy asked his teacher.



“How old are you?” asked the teacher.



“Eight years old, sir.”
answered the boy.


“Then you have just lost eight years,”
the teacher replied.



There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age. When one is young, it is easy to acquire good habits.









Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life. The habit of brushing one’s teeth in the morning, for instance, kee
ps
one’s
teeth
clean
and
prevents
a
bad
smell
which
is
unpleasant
to
others.
Bad
habits
such
as
sticking
one’s
tongue
out,
biting
one’s
fingernails and picking one’s nose, are undesirable ways of behaving in front of others. If we want people to enjoy being w
ith us, we
should try to develop habits that are pleasant.







It is said, “We sow an act; we reap a habit. We sow a habit and we reap a character.” The habits we formed at an early age sh
ape
our character. Habits are like tributaries(
支流
) which flow int
o a river. The river is made up of all its tributaries; a person’s character is
made up of all the habits that he or she has acquired over the years.
【写作内容】



1.
以约
30
个词概括本文内容；



2.
以约
120
个词谈谈你对好习惯养成的看法，并包括以下要点：


（
1
）你认为好习惯重要吗，为什么？


（
2
）你身上有哪些好习惯，它们对你的学习或生活有什么影响？


（
3
）怎样才能养成良好的习惯？

【写作要求】


1.
作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得 直接引用原文的句子。

2.
作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop
good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.





I can’t agree more with the author. Cultivating a good habit can not only shape our character,
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increase our inner beauty but also influence those people around us. Therefore, I think it is of great
significance to form a good habit.







As
for
me,
I
benefit
a
lot
from
my
good
habits
like
getting
up
early
to
speak
English
aloud, reviewing and previewing lessons before going to bed every day. In the past, I didn’t dare
to
speak
English
before
others
because
of
my
poor
pronunciation
and
I
also
did
badly
in
my
English
tests. Thanks
to
my
good
habits,
however,
I
have
been
making
progress
in
my
English
study. Now I am proud of my speaking and writing in English.







Then
how
can
we
form
a
good
habit?
First
of
all,
you
should
be
determined
to
fight
against your laziness. Once you make up your mind to do something, never give up easily. Then,
you have to be confident, believing that you can become a better person. Last but not least, keep
pushing
yourself.
It
may
take
a
long
period
for
you
to
form
a
good
habit
but
remember
it
is
perseverance that makes you successful!
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To make it easier for her parents to get to America, a young woman has drawn three pictures.
These pictures contain almost all the necessary information the old couple may need on their way
to America. With vivid drawings and clear instructions, they are impressive and easy to understand.
(31words)
Seeing the pictures, I’m deeply moved like many others. The young woman is very sweet and
considerate. She loves her parents so much. Also, she must have taken a lot of pains to come up
with such a wonderful idea, which will be of great help to her parents.
As for me, my parents are faced with much pressure from work and life. I should try my best
to help them. For example,
…

In addition, …

4
Time to give thanks


When it comes to Thanksgiving, turkey may be the first thing that comes to mind. It’s the right picture, but it’s not complet
e.


Celebrated
on
the
fourth
Thursday
in
November
every
year,
Thanksgiving
Day
is
a
time
for
thanksgiving
and
feasts.
It’s
about
expressing your gratitude to the important people and all the good things in your life.
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Americans
celebrate
Thanksgiving
with
much
warmth
and
keep
many
traditional
customs.
Here
we
introduce
two
of
the
rules
Americans typically follow on this day.
1. Time for prayers and paying back


Thanksgiving Day has been associated with prayers in church and in homes for centuries. Attending church prayer services in the
morning is the first step of many celebrators on Thanksgiving Day. The churches provide worship (
礼拜
) services and organize special
events for the occasion.


Before
Thanksgiving
meals,
some
families
gather
together
and
read
prayers
to
thank
God
for
his
kindness
and
the
gifts
he
has
bestowed upon (
给予
) them in the form of friends and family.


Some people also do voluntary community work on this day, as a way of paying back.
2. Family reunions and showing gratitude
Like
China’s
Spring
Festival,
preparing
a
big
meal
and
bringing
the
famil
y
together
at
home
is
a
long-standing
tradition
of
Thanksgiving. Distances don’t really matter as relatives return home to be with their family, no matter how far away.

【写作内容】

1.
用约
30
个单词写出上文概要；

2.
用约
120
个单词谈谈你对感恩的想法，内容包括：

(1)
你认为我们中国人有没有必要过
“
感恩节
”
？为什么？


(2)
以你自己的经历或者身边的人为例，阐述重视感恩的必要性；

(3)
总结你的观点。

【写作要求】

1.
可以支持文中任一观点，但必须提供理由或论据；


2.
阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；

3.
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；














4.
不必写标题。

【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

This passage is mainly about the custom of a western traditional festival, Thanksgiving Day,
which mainly includes the two rules that Americans usually abide by during the festival.










After
reading
the
passage,
I
had
a
better
understanding
of
Thanksgiving
Day.
In
my
opinion, since the festival has a lovely and healthy theme, why not do as the Americans do?
Don’t
you think giving thanks to things and people around us is very necessary. We can’t deny it is a
good chance to spread kindness and consideration.

Take myself for example. Because I am busy in studying on weekdays, I have little time to
lo
ok after my parents, which makes me guilty. In order to reward them and make them relaxed on
the weekend, I get up early in the morning and prepare breakfast for them willingly, which makes
them delighted.



So it is vital for us to have a grateful heart and show our thanks to anything good and any
person that is nice.

5
It’s show time! China’s TV channels have ever been full of various shows since the cra
ze for Super Girl in 2004. Regarding voice as the
only
ruler,
The
V
oice
of
China
quickly
became popular
around
Chinese
mainland
and
topped
a
league
of
all
shows broadcast
by
the
country’s local TV stations
. Its popularity also drew record advertising, the final episode
（集）
attracting an ad spend of 500,000 yuan per
second. Plus, the episodes of If You Are the One
（
非诚勿扰）
, both hot and controversial, became an instant hit, proving that dating shows
can
be
entertaining
and
mainstream
at
the
same
time.
Another
TV
show
Where
Are
We
Going,
Dad?
produced
by
Hunan
Satellite
Television, has been wowing
（使
……
叫好）
audiences across the nation, filling the Internet with heated discussions about the father's
figure
．

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无味的意思-有关中秋的诗词

无味的意思-有关中秋的诗词

无味的意思-有关中秋的诗词

无味的意思-有关中秋的诗词

无味的意思-有关中秋的诗词

无味的意思-有关中秋的诗词

无味的意思-有关中秋的诗词

无味的意思-有关中秋的诗词