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篇一：英语作文批改网
AIDS is the threat of entire society
What is AIDS?
AIDS is a serious infectious disease
that can cause people to death.
The
AIDS virus which is also call human
immunodeficiency virus(HIV)
invades
the
human
body
then
destructs
body's
immune
function. It can make people suffer
from various incurable infections
and
tumors. The full name of AIDS is Acquired Immune
Deficiency
Syndrome.
From
its
name
we
can
know
three
specific
definition,
Acquired means the cause is acquired
rather than innate;
Immune
Deficiency means in the aspects of
pathogenesis, it is mainly caused
by
the body's immune system and lead to reduce
the damage
or loss of the protective
function of the immune system; Syndrome
means In the clinical symptoms, complex
symptoms due to various
system
immunodeficiency caused by infection and tumor.
The origin
of
AIDS
is
Africa
and
mainly
comes
from
developing
country.
Transmission and pathogenesis of AIDS
The AIDS virus mainly
exists in the various body fluids of the AIDS
virus infection and has strong
infectious. The main route of infection
of
the
AIDS
virus
are
sexual
transmission,
blood
transmission
and
mother
to
child
transmission.
From
HIV
infection
to
develop
into
AIDS
patients
has
four
stage:
The
first
phase
is
acute
stage,
The
second
stage
is
the
asymptomatic
period,
which
is
called
the
incubation period, too.
The third stage is the pre AIDS. The fourth
period is full period of AIDS or AIDS
in the late, which is the most
complex.
The treatment and
prevention of AIDS
AIDS is
a serious infectious disease with high fatality
rate, there is
still
no
cure
for
drugs
and
methods,
but
can
be
prevented.
Drug
therapy
can
be
divided
into
three
categories:
Anti
HIV
drugs,
immunomodulators
and
anti
infective
Drugs.
AIDS
is
a
threat
to
every
person
and
every
family,
the
prevention
of
AIDS
is
the
responsibility
of
the
whole
society.
Many
daily
behaviors
cannot
infect AIDS virus. To
comply with sexual morality is the fundamental
measures
for
the
prevention
of
the
sexual
transmission
of
AIDS.
Sharing
syringes,
drug
taking
is
a
major
channel
for
the
spread
of
AIDS, therefore, we should refuse drugs
and cherish life.
篇二：批改网高分作文
批改网高分作文
Who Are
Teachers
’
Pets,
Boys or Girls?
1
）
Nowadays,
a
growing
number
of
people
tend
to
think
about
a
question: who do teachers like more?
Reading this table, we can
get some information and analyse the
result via the figures.
Obviously, teachers favor girls over
boys in
primary
school.
As
far
as
I
concerned,
the
most
indispensable
reason
is
that
girls
are
quiet,
smart
and
well-
behaved
during
that
age.
While
in
junior
middle
school,
hat
might
seem
to
be
no
difference between boys
and girls. In a word, there is no prejudice
and
gender
discrimination
at
that
time.
Nevertheless
things
are
getting change when
coming to senior high school. The most
reasonable
explanation
is
that
girls
are
superior
to
boys
in
math
and
physics
up
to
the
age
of
ten,
fall
behind
from
then
on.
under
that
circumstance,
teachers
is
shown
to
call
on
male
in
class
far
more than female students. While in
college, teachers seem to have
no
preference
in
student
because
of
the
less
attention
and
unawareness
2
）
It is obviously that the answer of such
question changes frequently
as
students
growing
up
and
here
is
my
analyze
according
to
the
chart.
First
of
all,
girls,
in
my
opinion,
are
much
more
welcomed
in
primary
school.
Over
two-thirds
of
students
believe
that
female
students are
teacher's pet in primary school. Second,
however,
conclusion
in
senior
middle
school
is
quite
different
because
half
of
students
hold
the
view
that
it
was
boys
that
are
teacher's pet. Thirdly, the
circumstance in junior middle school
as
well as In college is between two extremes which
means neither
boys nor girls have
advantage to be pets of teachers.
What conclusion can I draw is that the
chart indicates us girls are
more
welcomed by teacher at low grades because they are
not only
quite gentle and quiet but
also boys are naughty at the same time.
As time goes by, though, such
difference gradually disappear which
lead to
such result. Last
but not least, I hold the view that there is no
sex,
including boys and girls, can hold
teachers' love forever
3
）
Rencently,
a
survey
on"who
are
teachers'
pets"has developed among students
. According to the chart,
we can easily
find that the majority of pupil's answers are
girls,
the
junior
students
said
that
all
of
them
were
favored,
a
lot
of
middle
school
students
replied:
"girls!
",
while
college
students thought neither of them is
teachers' pet.
So,
why
did
the
phenomenon
occurred?
I
suppose
the
following
reasons
can
account
for
it.
In
primary
school,
girls
are
generally
obedient,
while
boys
may
be
more
naughty.
Girls
are
good
at
reading
and
writing,
but
boys
show
nothing
superior .
Of
course
,
teachers
think more of girls. In junior school , boys
perform as well
as girls , so the
teacher will think all of them are great. When go
to
the
senior
school
,
boys
become
more
initiative
and
are
more
interested
in
mathematics,
which
can
ignite
teachers'
enthusiasm
of
teaching.
On
the
university
,
boys
and
girls
have
to
rely on
their own efforts to learn more, thus, the
teachers can pay
less
attention.
As
far
as
I'm
concerned,
teachers
shouldn't
hold
different
attitudes
to
students'gender
.
Both
girls
and
boys
should
be
treated
equally
to
have
a
better
prospect.
4
）
Reading
this
chart,
we
can
discover
that
most
of
the
primary
school students
think girls are teachers' pets. In contrast,
most
of
the
high
school
students
think
boys
are
teachers'
pets.
While
in
junior
middle
schools
and
in
colleges,
the
numbers
of
students who think boys or girls are
teacher's pets are almost
equally,
more
that
they
think
it
depends
on
teachers'
mind.
For
this,
its
reasons
are
obviously.
First,
primary
school
teachers
have to pay more attention to girls. In
that not only girls are timid,
but also
boys may bully them. Second, high school teachers
believe