冀教版六年级英语上册写作
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专项训练四：写作
一、范文展示。
1.
这学期学习了形容词的比较级，相信你能恰当地运用它介绍你的好朋友，请你从年
龄、身高、体重、爱好等方面向我们介绍一下他
(
她
)
吧！
范文：
My friend
I have a lovely friend at school. Her
name is Amy. She is 12 years old now. She is
one year older than me. She is 1. 5
meters tall. She is 43 kilograms and I'm 41
kilograms.
She's taller and heavier
than me. We both have round faces and long hair.
But my eyes are
bigger than hers.
Winter is our favourite season. And we have the
same hobby. We both
like playing table
tennis. So we often play table tennis together
after school. How happy
we are!
译文：
我的朋友
在学校我有一个可爱的朋友
。她叫埃米。她现在
12
岁了。她比我年长
1
岁。她
高
1.
5
米，重
43
千克，我重
41
千克。她比我又高又重。我们都有圆脸和长头发。
但是我的眼睛比她的大。冬天是我们最喜爱的季节。我们有相同的爱好，我们都喜
爱打乒乓球，所以我们经常放学后一起打乒乓球。我们多么快乐啊！
2.
假设你是李雷，请你给你的英国笔友
Jack
写一封信，告诉他你是如何度过周末的。
范文：
Dear
Jack
，
I
was
busy
last
weekend.
On
Saturday
morning
，
I
did
my
homework.
My
mother
and
I
went
shopping
in
the
afternoon.
We
bought
some
apples.
My
mother
bought
a
football
for me. I was very happy. On
Sunday
，
I visited my grandpa.
He had a cold. He
stayed at home and
slept. I did housework for him. I cleaned his
room. And I also helped
him wash his
clothes and cook dinner. I was tired in the
evening.
1
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4
Did you have a
busy weekend
？
Please tell me.
Love
，
Li Lei
译文：
亲爱的杰克：
上周末我很忙碌。周六
上午我写我的家庭作业。下午我和我妈妈一起去购物。
我们买了一些苹果。我妈妈给我买
了一个足球。我很高兴。周日我去看望我的爷
爷。他感冒了。他呆在家里睡觉。我为爷爷
做家务。我打扫他的房间。我还帮他洗
衣服和做晚饭。到了晚上，我觉得很累。
你有过一个忙碌的周末吗？请告诉我吧。
爱你的，
李雷
3.
去年的寒假生活一定给你留下了深刻的印象吧！你能和大家分享一下吗？
提示：
(1)Where did you go?
(2)How did you go there?
(3)What did you do there?
要求：
(1)
根据提示的问题，用一般过去时介绍。条理清晰，意思明确，句子通顺，语法
正确。
(2)
书写工整规范，
50
词左右。
范文：
Last winter
holiday
My family went to Sanya last
winter holiday. I was very excited. We went there
by
plane.
The
weather
was
so
warm
in
Sanya.
Sanya
is
a
beautiful
city.
We
took
lots
of
pictures. The seafood
there was very delicious. We also went swimming
and went fishing.
And
I
bought
some
gifts
for
my
friends.
We
stayed
there
for
three
days.
We
enjoyed
ourselves!
译文：
去年寒假
去年寒假，我们一家人去了
三亚。我非常兴奋。我们乘飞机去那儿的。三亚的
天气那么温暖。三亚是一个美丽的城市
。我们拍了很多照片。那里的海鲜非常美
味。我们还去游泳和钓鱼了。我为我的朋友们买
了礼物。我们在那儿呆了三天。我
们玩得很愉快！
4.
二十年前你们的学校和现在相比有什么变化呢？请写几句
话告诉我们它发生了什么
样的变化。不少于
50
词。
范文：
Our school's changes
Twenty
years ago
，
our school was
very small. At that
time
，
there were only several
buildings in it. There was no gym in
the school. But now there's a new one in our
school.
We can do sports there after
school. Before, there wasn't a library and there
weren't any
computer rooms in
our school.
Now we can read
books
in
our new library
and use the
Internet in
computer rooms. Our school is big and beautiful
now. We all like it.
译文：
我们学校的变化
20
年前，我们的学校非常小。在那时，学校里只有几栋楼。学校里没有体育
馆。但
是现在我们学校里有一个新的体育馆。放学后我们可以在那里做运动。以前
我们的学校没
有图书馆和电脑室。如今我们可以在新图书馆里看书，在电脑室里使
用互联网。现在我们
的学校又大又美丽。我们都喜欢它。
二、写作训练。
1.
认真看图，假设你就是图中的
Lily
，请向大家介
绍一下你的家人。
提示：你已经学习了形容词的比较级，相信
你能恰当地运用它介绍你的家人。说说
你的家里有几口人，他们都是谁，从年龄、身高、
体重等方面介绍。
2
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4
要求：语句通顺，语法正确，书写
规范，
50
词左右。
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2.
上周末，虽然你
(Mike)<
/p>
做了很多事情，但是你过得很开心，以下是你做的事情。
a. get up and have breakfast
b. do your homework
c. play
football with your friends
d. clean
your bedroom
e. read a book
f. see a film with your family
< br>请你给你的朋友
Lily
写一封信，告诉她你上周末所做
的事情和你的感受。
要求：①书写格式正确，条理清晰，意思明确，可增添词句；
②标点正确，书写工整、规范；
③不
少于
50
个单词。