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2021年2月23日发(作者：悸动的心)

范例一

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Y

our Classes Regularly

。

Y

ou

should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1.

现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象

2.

保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性

3.

作为一个大学生应该怎样做

Attend Y

our Classes Regularly

Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even

absent from

classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance

has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers.

In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch

up with

the teachers

in your

learning.

That

is

very

helpful

to you

if you

want to

do

a

good

job

in your

study.

Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Y

our teachers will feel bad if

the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no

good for the

students.

Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for

the students to do a good job in the future.

Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on.

And some day we‘ll benefit from it.

点评

：

2008

年元月三日， 中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；

2008

年元月四日，中国政 法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中

小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新 闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问

题解决型的写 作，与校园生活密切相关。

范例二

For

this

part,

you

are

allowed

30

minutes

to

write

a

composition

on

the

topic:

Students

’

Rating

of

Their < /p>

Teachers

。

Y

< br>ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

1.

学生给老师打分已经普遍

2.

人们对其持不同态度

3.

我的看法

Students‘ Rating of Their Teachers

Nowadays,

it

has

become

as

common

in

colleges

and

universities

for

students

to

grade

teachers

as

for

teachers

to grade students. In some universities students‘ rating has even become the only source of information on

teaching effectiveness..

This, however, has caused

great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since

students attend t

he teachers‘ classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers‘ effectiveness.

Others,

on

the

contrary,

are

strongly

against

it. They

believe

that there

is

much

more

to teaching

than

what

is

shown on students‘ rating forms. Students sh

ould not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to

date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which is

best left for the teachers‘ colleagues.

I think students‘ rating of their

teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed

meaningful

light

on

teachers‘

performance.

Instead

of

rating

the

teachers‘

knowledge

on

the

subject,

students

should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, an

d to report on such things as a teacher‘s ability

to

communicate

with

students,

his

or

her

relationship

with students,

and

his

or

her

ability

to

arouse students‘

interest in the subject.

点评

：越来越多的高校采取让学生给老师打 分的形式来了解教学反馈，并以此作为促进教学质量的有效手段。对此做法，管理

部门及 教学双方褒贬不一，看法迥异。本范例题为校园生活热议话题，值得关注。

范例三

Directions:

For

this

part, you

are

allowed

30

minutes

to

write

a

composition

on

the

topic

On

a

Harmonious

Dormitory Life. Y

ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.

宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况

;

2.

一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性

;

3.

如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。

On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

Dormitory

life

is

an

indispensable

part

of

college

life.

But

sometimes

the

harmony

in

the

dormitory

be

disturbed in one way or another.

As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members.

On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have a good mood

and enjoy being together.

There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your

life-

style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you‘ll

just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-

exist. Thirdly, you‘ll have to share w

ith each other and make good

friends.

In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of

good study and

good life.

点评

：

“和 谐”成为我们当今社会词频概率最高用词，就社会而言，倡导建立和谐社会；就家庭而言，提倡建设和谐家庭；就 校

园来讲，则要建立和谐校园；和谐两字似乎无所不在，大学生宿舍生活同样需要和谐。 本范例题与四级考试热点密切相关，又

为典型的校园生活主题，值得关注。

范例四

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Brief Introduction to the University. Y

ou should

write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:

假 设你是一名学生志愿者，要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。内容应包括学校历史、规模、

< p>
教学现状以及未来目标等。

A Brief Introduction to the University

Distinguished guests,

Welcome

to

our

university.

Before you start to

look

around,

allow

me

to

give

you

a

brief

account

of

the

school.

Founded in 1927, our university is one of this city‘s earliest u

niversities of liberal arts. It is staffed with an

excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students. In the past years, it has turned out numerous

well- qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of life.

Since its establishment, the university has always steered itself toward the objective that its students have an

overall healthy development. Not only does it provide the students with basic academic courses, but it manages to

expose them to the up-to- date knowledge. Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and

social practice, which are intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent.

Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in the

direction of a first-rate university. Thank you.

点评

：近几 年，随着我国顺利加入世贸组织以及经济全球化步伐的加快，许多国内高校纷纷与国外大学合作办学，教育走向国

际化成为人们关注的热点，也是大学生门比较关心的热点问题。本范例题为热议校园生活 话题，与

2004

年旅游景点介绍

20 06

年考查的名校校园开放如出一辙。

范例五

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a friend who will come to your city to see

you. Y

ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

假设你是李明

,

你的一个朋友张伟准 备到你所在的城市来旅游，但你有事不能接待。写封信给他，解释你

不能接待的原因，并 说明你所做的安排。

A Letter to a Friend

Dear Zhang Wei,

I‘m glad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer vaca

tion.

However, I‘m afraid there‘s some bad news. I‘m planning to take part in an international

conference to be

held in another city during the time of your visit. All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference.

More importantly, I‘m luc

ky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the

Conference. I really can‘t miss it.

I understand that it‘ll be your first time to this city and I‘m your only friend here. I‘ve asked my roommate to

meet you at the airport, and you can stay in my room. He is a very nice person and he will show you around the

city. Hope you two will get on well and have a nice holiday!

Y

ours,

Li Ming

点评

：本范例题与< /p>

2001

年

6

月 考查的

A

Letter to a Schoolmate

类似，所不同是写作提示有所不同，

2001

< br>年

6

月作文题是写信对

校友来度 假表示欢迎并在信中提出建议和注意事项，而本范例题是对朋友来访不能接待，同时在信中说明原因及具体安排， 内

容不一，但话题相仿，写作思路相似，值得关注。

范例六

For

this

part,

you

are

allowed

30

minutes

to

write

a

composition

on

the

topic:

Living

alone

or

Living

with

Roommates? Y

ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in

Chinese.

1

．

有人认为大学里应独自生活

2

．

另一些认为大学里应与别人同住

3

．

你的看法

Living alone or Living with Roommates

Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should live

alone outside the campus or live together with other roommat

es in the students‘ dormitory. Opinions are divided

over the matter.

Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves. They can

enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own. They can have their own timetable without disturbing others. They

are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.

But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own. With several students sharing the same

room

, each person‘s experiences can be

greatly enriched. They can learn

a lot from talking to one

another. By

learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.

As far as I‘m concerned, I prefer to live with roommates becaus

e I love the feeling of belonging. Besides, it is

a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent a apartment outside the campus.

点评

：本文与校园生活密切相关，也 是近年来出现的现象，人们对此的看法各异，

2003

年后，四 级作文考查加大了学校生活类

题目的考查，因为这类题材不存在地域的差异，不同地域的 同学都有话可说。本

范例题即为校园生活类话题，与刚考完的四级

作文话题类似，符合命题者出题思路，值得引起重视。

范例七

Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic :Cell Phones .Y

ou should

write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:

1.

描述上图所示的手机用户数的变化情况

2.

出现这种情况的原因

3.

对此现象作出评价

Cell Phones

As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number of

cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. And in the year 2005, the number

has suddenly soared to 9 million.

There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried

everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music

and

chat

through

sending

short

messages.

Thirdly, the

drop

in price

and

the

simultaneous

improvement

in

the

functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.

The wide use of cell phones has make them more and more indispensable

in people‘s daily life. The many

functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.

点评

：随着 我国经济的快速发展，人民的生活水平不断改善，通讯业的日新月异的发展，使得手机使用普及化，成为人们日常

生活的必需品，对此的利弊人们看法各异。本范例题为热点话题，同样是年轻人较熟悉和 经常讨论的话题，值得关注。

范例八

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic

Advertisement. Y

ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.

广告的作用

2.

广告的形式多样

3.

广告的夸张性

Advertisement

Advertisements are forcing their way into people‘s lives. People refer to advertisements in their daily lives

because they are consumers. The advertisers are usually manufacturers, retailers and salesmen. Their merchandise

needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers. Thus nearly every product is advertised in some

way. To a large extent, good advertising leads to success while bad advertising can mean failur

e.

There are many ways to advertise and ‗ads‘ come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some

products are publicized on TV and radio which bring them

into notice of a wide audience. Billboards also carry

advertising. Advertising is a big industry now and many agencies have been set up to furnish a variety of forms..

However, advertising is not always truthful. A product is often misrepresented. The advertiser exaggerates the

benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he misrepresents the truth. The consumer falls victim to such

advertising. Millions of people have bought advertised products and have been dissatisfied with them

。

点评

：这是一篇说明文，用说明的表达方式来解说事物，阐明事理。写好 说明文，不仅要抓住特征，注意条理，而且要巧妙运

用说明方法，像下定义、举例子、作 比较、分类别、列数字、打比方等

范例九

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the President

of the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on Campus. Y

ou should write no more than 120 words, and

base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

假设你是李明， 请你写一封信给校长，建议改善本校体育设施状况，内容应涉及体育设施对大学生的重要

性，对目前学校体育设施的状况可以表扬，可以提出批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

A Letter to the President of the University

Dear Mr. President,

I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports facilities on campus. I have noticed that

our university has very limited resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given that the

number of students on campus is increasing every year.

As we both know, sports are very important for the sound growth of young people. If they have access to

quality sports facilities, young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and confidence,

and to build a positive outlook and sense of achievement.

My proposal is to build a new sports area. It should be designed with soccer players, basketball players, and

ping-pong players in mind. It should have a different section for each activity and be available to students all year

round. I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.

Thank you for your reading this letter.

Y

ours faithfully,

Li Ming

点评

：本范例题仿真 度颇高，为校园生活话题，与在校大学生日常生活密切相关，是最近几年侧重考查的题材。

2002

年

1

月考

< br>查了就本校食堂状况给校长写一封信

.

范例十

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Blog. Y

ou should write at least

120 words based on the chart and outline given below:

下图是

< p>
2007

年

1-10

月中 国博客服务人均月度有效浏览时间及增长率，描述变化，说明原因。

Blog

This histogram shows the number of people using blog services from January to October in 2007. From it we

can

see

that

the

number

of

users

increased

monthly

from

January to

August,

except

February. After two peak

months, July and August, the number dropped slightly in September, while in October it picked up again.

Possible

reasons

for

these

changes

are

first,

in

February

Chinese

people

celebrated

the

most

important

festival

——

Chinese

New

Y

ear.

This

means

more

people

spent

more

time

with their

families

and

friends,

and

therefore they didn‘t have as much time for surfi

ng online.

Secondly, college students are the main users of blog

services.

While

in

July

and August

，

they

had summer

holidays,

which

enabled

them

to

have

more

spare time

reading and writing blogs. Thirdly, with improvements of blog services and the influenc

e of some ―star bloggers‖,

most

of

whom

are

celebrities,

blogs

are

becoming

an

important

way

for

people

to

express

themselves

and

communicate

with

others.

So

more

and

more

people

are

starting

to

use

these services,

which

help

explain

the

overall increase shown here.

点评

：这是一篇图表题。

< p>
可以看出，整体呈增长趋势。但是，二月和九月有所下降。所以，分析的时候要照顾各个方面。

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.m

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.com

整理

范例十一

Directions: F

or this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students‘ Job

Hunting. Y

ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1.

近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象

2.

产生这种现象的原因（如大学生追求的目标过高，专业不 对口等）

3.

如何解决这一问题（改变就业观念，大学生再培训等）

College Students‘ Job Hunting

In

recent

years,

college

students

find

it

increasingly

difficult

to

get

a

job.

It

sounds

strange

since

young

college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and

eager to bring their talent into

full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?

There are several reasons for this. To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high. All they want are

―good‖

jobs

which

could

offer

good

salary,

comfortable

working

conditions,

high

social

statu

s

among

others.

Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not ―good‖ enough. Another

reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs.

So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.

Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students. The companies should value the

students,

talent

and

knowledge

while

the

latter

should

not

merely

aim

at

material

gains.

They

should

be

down- to

–

earth

in

building

up

their

career.

Furthermore,

they

should

face

their

weak

points

so

as

to

improve

themselves and be more competent.

点评

：本范例题为社会热点 话题。近年来大学生就业难日益成为各级政府及社会各方面关注的焦点，媒体也广泛报道了大学生

就业形势严峻，呼吁全社会共同努力；此外，该范例题也与大学生就业密切相关，也是四级作文选题重点 之一。

范例十二

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of traffic jam. Y

ou should

write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

１．在现代社会，城市交通问题变得越来越严重

２．城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活的影响

３．解决的方法与措施

Traffic Jam

There

is

no

doubt that

traffic

congestion

becomes

a

growing

worry

for the

residents

of

most

urban

areas.

Some

major

roads

are

regularly

choked

with

traffic

in

rush

hours.

The

limited

transport

capacity

contributes

largely to the vexing problem. How to solve the headache?.

The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bus systems and broadening

major roads.

Widening the existing roads can solve traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic

annoying

problem,

so

we

must

sharply

reduce

the

heavy

reliance

on

cars

and

drive

a

shift

to

the

mass

transportation. It is a cheap and

good way. We can create a system of customized bus routes and highlight the

development of subways, trolleys and light rail. The effective combination of these solutions will enable the urban

areas to possess a smooth traffic.

点评

< br>：

交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。

1990

年

6

月考查过

Ho w to solve the problem of

Heavy Traff

ic,1994

年

1

月考题

The

World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller

也与交通有关，近年来，随着私家车的日益增多，城市交通拥堵凸显，出行难越来越成为人

们关注的焦点。

范例十三

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Environmental Protection.

Y

ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1.

全球变暖对地球环境造成了很大影响

2.

引起全球变暖的原因

3.

我们需要采取的措施

Environmental Protection

No one

，

regardless of race, religion or nationality, can deny that the world we live in is becoming increasingly

intolerable because of the effects of global warming. According to many experts, even greater impacts are still on

the way.

There

are

numerous

causes

for

this

problem.

On

one

hand,

human-related

emissions

of

carbon

into

the

atmosphere is causing, and will in the future cause, significant

global warming according to the theory. On the

other

hand,

the

lack

of

knowledge

about

the

importance

of

protecting

environment

hinders

the

solving

of

the

problem.

It

is

urgent that

immediate

and

effective

actions

should

be

taken

right

away.

First,

more trees

need

to

be

planted

to

help

improve

and

beautify

the

environment.

Besides,

stricter

laws

concerning

global

warming

and

irresponsible use of fuel resources have to be put into effect and achieved good results. In a word, there is a long

way to go before we can take a comfortable world for granted again .

点评

：环境问题也是四级作文命题重点话题之一。大学英语

( Q

吧

)

四级考试曾经考过

Make

our Cities

Greener

.

近年来，全球气候

异常，造成许多自 然灾害的频繁，保护环境刻不容缓，已成为全社会乃至全人类共同关注的热点。

范例十四

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of

Credit Cards. Y

ou should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.

越来越多的人使用信用卡，

信用卡有哪些好处

2.

信用卡的弊端

3.

你自己的观点

Credit Cards

Personal

credit

cards

are

becoming

more

common

in

China.

Banks

and

other

financial

institutions

are

encouraging their customers to change the way

they buy things. Credit cards, otherwise known as ―plastic money‖,

are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consumers will be able to ―buy now, pay later‖,

and many see this as an advantage.

But people need to be careful. There are dangers associated with credit cards. Some people find it very easy

to exceed their budget. They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, and can become quickly

overburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a high rate of

interest, which exacerbates the problems for

these people.

However, used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of people‘s lives. They can give people access to

money to meet sudden unplanned expenses. Properly handled, they can let people control their expenditure and the

monthly statements provide a record of where their money has gone.

点评

：这是一篇议论文，

关于信用卡的利弊。可以分成三部分：

第一部分，信用卡的好处，比如说应急等；第二部分，信用

卡的一些弊端，比如说鼓励 一些无用的消费；第三部分：你自己的观点，理性使用。

范例十五

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Pet Raising . Y

ou should

write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1

．

有些人喜欢养动物作为宠物。

2

．

有些人反对圈养动物作为宠物。

3

．

你的观点。

Pet Raising

Nowadays, with the improvement of the people‘s living standard, some people form a habit of raising small

or domestic animals as pets. Some raise small dogs or cats as their pets while others raise various birds or fishes as

their pets.

However, some people object to the idea of raising animals as pets. To them, animals have their own right to

live

a natural life like human beings. On the other hand, the way people raise animals

as pets have a negative

influence

on

the

surroundings

,for

example,

dogs‘

chasing

people

on

the

street

and so

on.

What‘s

more,

some

animals will transmit some diseases.

In my opinion, I do not like the idea to raise animals at pets. We should not dep

rive them of their natural right.

In this way, we will live in a peaceful world in harmony with the other living creatures.

范例十六

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How People Spend Their

Holidays.

Y

ou

should

write

at

least

120

words,

and

base your

composition

on

the table

and

the

outline

given

below:

1

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根据上 表，简要描述

1990

年、

1995< /p>

年、

2000

年某城市人们度假方式的情 况及其变化；

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