有关爱的作文-激荡的意思

2021年1月29日发(作者：淹没湮没)











2017
中考英语作文题目（热门话题）大全

中考英语作文培训

中考英语作文阅卷三个标准：

1
）

结构
2
）内容要点

3
） 语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档，
看语言给成绩。

中考作文审题五个步骤：
（定时态
——
定结构
——
正确句型 ）

审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生，我要说的是审题一定要做到四个方面


一审主题（写什么）
，

二审人称（用什么人称写）

三审体裁（记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议）
，

四审时态（时态中考两个错误扣一分，三个降一档）
，

五审内容要点（一定要在
试卷中画出，免得写的时

候忘记，导致跑题）

中考满分作文五个关键点：

―结构
+
要点
+
逻辑
+
语法
+
亮点！< br>‖

结构：
中考最流行的结构就是三段式，
结构十分清晰。
―
观点
（总）
——
要点
（分）
——
总结（总）< br>‖
让人一目了然。

三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过
2
句话，

第二段 ：
分
2-3
点说明。
第三段：
经过第二段的论证，
可以得出 结论，
要有升华。

要点：
实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！
因为中考英语写作一般会给出
几个要点，

要求必须在文章中有所 体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣
分。所以要点，也就是文

章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑 词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总
结的逻辑词

等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会 很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词
体现了这个文章的思路。


表起始的过渡语
:first of all, to begin with, so far, as far as

表时间的过渡语
:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally
表因果的过渡语

for, because of, one reason is
that…
another reason is
that…,
so, as a result (of)
表转折的过渡语
:but, yet, however, after all, in fact,
表列举的过渡语
:for example, such as, and so on
表推进的过渡语

:what’s
more, on one
hand…
on the other
hand…,
not
only…but

also…,besides,

表总结的过渡语
:
in short, in a word, in general,
语法：其他几点都不是硬性 的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是
语法却是硬

性的。如，单词的使用，时态，人称等。

亮点：

当我们 将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。
要想得到一
等文，最后两个字，亮 点至关重要。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是
结构清晰的三段式，要

< br>点
都
很
全
，
都
用
了
一
些< br>逻
辑
词
，
都
没
有
语
法
错< br>误
，
但
是
A
篇
只
用
了
be autiful, good-looking, B
篇却用到了
attractive，
charming
，
catching
等，这些高
级一点的词 汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写
英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好 习惯。但是对于写作基础不是很好的同学，
切不要因为追求
―
亮点
‖
而用
―
错句，错词
‖
，以稳妥为重！


英语作文万能句子

段首句

1.
关于
……
人们有不同的观点。一些人认为
……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that____.
There is an old saying______.
2.
现在，
……
很普遍，
许多人喜欢
……
，
因为
……
，
另外（而且）
……
。
Nowadays
，
it is common to ______. Many people like______ Because ______. Besides
______.
3.
任何事物都是有两面性，
……
也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一
面
。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception. It has both advantage
s and disadvantages.
4
人类正面临着一个严重的问题
…
，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ..., which is becoming more and more serious.
5.
如今，人们普遍 认为
...,
但是我怀疑
...
。

Nowadays
，
it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...
6.―
如同硬币的正反面，
...
也有积极的一面和消极的一面。

Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...
7.―
随着
...
的快速增长，
...
在日常生活中已经变得越来越 重要。

Along with the rapid growth of ..., ...has become increasingly important in our daily
8
列举时可以用

，
First of all,
首先
secondly,
其次
beside,
另外
what's more,
另外
last but not least
最
后的但不是不重要的



【话题一：二胎】

假如你是初中生李华，
在家是独生子女，
国家开放二孩政策后，
你的父母想< br>再生一个孩子，征求你的意见。恰好你的美国笔友
Peter
来信询问我国的二孩政策。你给他回一封信，内容要点如下：


1.
简单解释国家二孩政策；


2
．得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法；


3
．征求
Peter
的看法。


注意：


1.
词数
100
左右；


2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；


3.
开头语已为你写好，不计入字数。

Dear Peter,
I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two
-child policy in
China.________ __________________________________________________ _____
________________________________________ _____________________________
________________ __________________________________________________ ___
__________________________________________ ___________.
Yours
Li Hua

【参考范文】

The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into
two- child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children.
Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries
me a great deal. Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have
to share everything with him or her. Most importantly, what if the love from my
parents is totally switched to the new child? As you have a younger sister, did you
have similar problems?What’s your opinion about this?


【话题二：安全自救】

【参考范文①】

Although our parents are trying their best to prevent us from difficulties,
teenagers have to learn how to protect ourselves. I remember once I was doing
shopping by myself. And a robbery happened. I was frightened. But I know that only
by calming down can I got through it. So I hid under a shelf and called the police. A
few minutes later,the policemen rushed into the store and saved everyone. That was
an extremely unforgettable experience of my life. Sometimes life gets in the way and
dangerous things are all over the world. Learning how to protect myself is very
essential.

【参考范文②】

安 全对于每个人都很重要。
中学生年龄较小，
学生安全更是人们关注的焦点，
请根据以下 提示，写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。


内容提示：

1.
交通安全
:
遵守交通规则
,
不闯红绿灯等；

2.
食品安全
:
吃健康食物
,
不吃垃圾食品等；

3.
活动安全
:
进行体育锻炼时
,
不要弄伤自己
,
不私 自下河游泳等。


作文要求
:
1.
词数
:100
词左右。正文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.
作文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；

3.
作文句型有变化，有复合句。

参考词汇：焦点：
focus
遵守：
obey
交通规则：
traffic rules...


Safety is very important to school students are flowers of our
country, so students’ safety is becoming the focus to us all.



First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when
the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street. Second, we should eat healthy
food. Don’t eat junk more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and
s, don’t hurt ourselves while we are playing. It’s dangerous to swim in the
river al
one, so don’t go to the river without permission.

In a word, it’s important to remember these for us all.


【参考范文③】

Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we
protect ourselves? Here are some of my suggestions.


First,we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if
we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep
ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Besides, we shouldn’t
crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. Last but not least,
summer is coming, we must remember it’s dan
gerous to swim alone.


In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from
danger.


【话题三：校园暴力】

近年全国发生数起严重的校园暴力事件，
某中学初三
8
班围绕校园安全问题
召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华，以
―H ow to protect ourselves in campus
violence‖
为标题写一篇发言稿，主要包括如下内容：

1
．校园暴力事件已引起广泛关注。

2
．要求每个学生都学习相关知识，增强自身防范能力。

3
．遇到 校园暴力时要采取适当措施，包括：保持冷静，判断清楚自己的处
境和可能的危险；尽一切可能避免人身 伤害；及时报警。

注意：
1
．词数
120
左右；开头和结 尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。





2
．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：增强
—
enhance
How to protect ourselves in campus violence
Dear friends,


This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very
bad results.__________________________________ __________________________
___________________ __________________________________________________
______________________________________________ ___________
That’s all. Thank you!


【参考范文①】

Dear friends,
This year, some seriously violent incidents happened in campus, resulting in very
bad results. The incidents of campus violence have drawn widespread attention in our
country. As a student, we should learn some knowledge about how to deal with the
violence and enhance the ability of self- protection.
Of course, if we meet the violence, we should take appropriate measures to
protect ourselves. At first, we’d better keep calm, judge the situation and be aware of
the possible dangers. Then, we should try our best to escape or prevent the violence.
At last but not least, we should call the police or teachers as soon as possible to avoid
the physical injury.

That’s all. Thank you.

【参考范文②】

There is a piece of news that makes me shocked. It is said that there happened a
violent event in campus which cause 4students injured and 2 dead. Some reasons
arouse in this event. First, schools should try to avoid things like this, if the students
are injured or dead, the schools have responsibility to them; second, families,
especially parents should educate their children well, give them a good guide and take
care of them; third, the society should control violent events. If the above three try
their best and pay enough attention to them, things like this should be avoided.

话题四

学术文化篇



1.
沉迷网络游戏



题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影 响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎
么帮他呢
?
请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于
80
字的短文。字迹工整，语言
流畅。



提示词：
give up concentrate on be (become)interested in


★

范文



Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.
As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.
Firstly,

I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend
most of his time on his study instead of computer games.
Secondly,
I must tell him
that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.
So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will
become
more
interested
in
sports
than
computer
games.
And
then
I'll
ask
him
to
concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his
subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.
At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.

If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.

2.
怎样学好英语



世界在发展，文化在交 融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语
是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累 了许多成功的经验，请
从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。



要求：
1.
词数：
80
—
100
词
(< br>开头已给出，不计入总词数
)


2.
字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。



★

范文




How to learn English well


English is
important
and useful
to
us.
How can we learn it well? Here are my
suggestions.


First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching
English
movies
is
also
helpful
to
us.
Second,
we
should
speak
English
in
class
as
much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more y
ou speak, the fewer
mistakes
you’ll
make.
We'd
better
join
the
English
club
and
practice
with
others.
Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last,
we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.


In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and
writing, we
will learn English well.

话题五

素质教育篇



3.
如何减压让生活更美好



许多学习生活中的烦恼都 会使人产生压力
,
为了更好地发现及解决同学们中
存在的心理压力问题
,你们班特意开展了一次以

为主
题的英语演讲比赛
,
请你准备发言 稿
,
谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法
,
与同学分
享
,
内容包括
:


(1)
同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么
;


(2)
我的压力是什么
;


(3)
我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。



注意
:
文中 不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数
80~100
。



★

范文



Less Pressure, Better Life


Hello, boys and girls!


Pressure is
a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under
too
much
pressure.
Some
students
ca
n’t
get
on
well
with
their
classmates,
while
others may worry about their exams.


I’m
always
under
pressure,
too.
My
parents
want
me
to
be
the
top
student
in
class. So they send me to all kinds of after- classes at weekends. Last Monday evening,
I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time
to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is
necessary to solve the problem.


That’s all. Thank you!

4.
学做好人好事



今年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：
“
我要把有限的生命，投
入到无限的 为人民服务之中去。
”



请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于
80
字的作文。



在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你
在日常生活中是如何帮 助他人的。



★

范文



Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted
all
this
life
into
his
beloved
career
as
well.
I,
myself,
was
totally
shocked
by
his
character.


Such
is
human
nature;
people
trace
the
good,
water
flows
to
low.
Everyone
should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan
―learn
from
Leifeng,
our
decent
idol‖,
so
that
we
could
de
finitely
see
a
lot
more
smiling faces rather than conflict.


To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it.
Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is
my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for
teachers when correcting them.


I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Leifeng as
our model and copy his spirit.

话题六

现代生活篇



5.
怎样保持健康的生活习惯



健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯
应当是怎样的呢
?请根据下面的信息提示
,
写一篇短文
,
首句已给出。



信息提示：健康饮食
;
早睡早起
,
不熬夜
;参加运动
,
强身健体。



要求
:
根据信息提示
,
把握要点
,
适当发挥
,
不逐字翻译。字数在
80
词左右。

★

范文




I think healthy habits are very important for us.


All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night.
We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second,
we must have the right
kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and
less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third,
we should do more exercise to
build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands
before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to
see the doctor at once.
6.
毕业感想



初中生活马上就要结束了
,
三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的
回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回 忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和
事后你的感想
(
请不要写出真实的学校名称以 及真实姓名
)
。



提示词语
: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
★

范文




How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate
from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness
and sadness with
you.
I
had
so
many
memories
in
three
years’
life.
One
of
them
impressed
me
very
much.
I
still
remember,
when
I
began
to
learn
English,
I
found
it
too
difficult.
No
matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it
up. As soon as
my
English
teacher
found
my
problem,
she
had
a
talk
with
me
about
how
to
learn
English
well.
Since
then,
she
has
kept
helping
me.
Little
by
little,
I’ve
become
interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of
her
students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble.
I think it is a happy thing to help others.

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